Carrie's Day in Court

[Beater]

Always nice to read your whimsical works again.

[skuttrusk]

Thanks! I'm traveling rn but will get back to Carrie's Hard Time next week. It might even expanmd inro a three-parter, I have a lot of nasty-but-fun things I want to do to Carrie and quite a bit of pent-up aggression to take out on her.

[Neighbor]

Delicious. We've all known characters like Carrie. I admit, ashamedly, that I have been at events twin to this. Altho it WAS in the early '60's when things like a "good old boy's court" were more common.
There was a decided air of "let's don't ruin this young man's life over something so trivial..."
... there was also a quiet, "It's time for you to go into the military, to remove you from further trouble..."

A story, and I assume "satire", excellently told, and purely entertaining.

[skuttrusk]

"Time for you to go into the military so the only girls you'll be raping will be in enemy countries."

This was sort of inspired by hearing about real legal abuses. The stories upset me so I exaggerated them to make them silly, so I could be sadistic to an innocent victim without being to realistic. Note that I still felt the need to get off on the stories...

[embarrassedalready]

i liked the unrealisticness of it, really.....i thought it was, well.....kinda cute, i guess......i mean, it gave it a sort of unreal comedy feel that was sadistic and mean at the same time.....i dunno, i'm probly not making any sense....

[skuttrusk]

No, that makes sense, Emily. On the one hand, some of the real-life horror is mitigated by humour, and on the other hand it's even meaner because the girl gets raped and it isn't even worth taking seriously.