Festival Fever

[LaLia]

Creative and great idea...

Great description and really fun to read. So, don't use a red tent in the future. :D

[RapeU]

I kept expecting someone to catch them and be like "yo what are you doing to my wife"

Great concept, and the peer pressure adds another level of rape to the story. After all, if you have to be pressured to have sex then technically you're getting raped too.

[Verbal13]

Bravo, that was fantastic! Love the way you handle the carnal action without too much depth of detail but plenty to make it fun. You got skills as a writer; looking forward to reading further works.
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-Verbal13

[SoftGameHunter]

Yeah, I had a few stray thoughts that kept on jerking me back to reality. Like, didn't they worry the tent owner would come back? Camping in these festivals is tight, so lookout or no lookout, they would have little warning. Later I figured it must be her own tent, and her attacker left. I also wondered if she wouldn't die of thirst, but assumed it was a plot hole worth just ignoring.

I like this. I think the head-spaces of the three guys could have been smoother and better fleshed out, but I can insert my imagination. Several fever-dream days of music, drugs, and the illicitest sex possible. A tacit silence would have followed, though I have to think that the publicity might have sparked at least a conversation or two. They got lucky (in more ways than one.) They believed they were playing with fire without getting burned, while they were actually just playing with fun sparkly lights. Okay, I'm torturing these metaphors, so I'm done. Good fun times.

[trio]

Thank you @SoftGameHunter , @Verbal13 , @RapeU and @LaLia for your feedback. I wrote a follow-up story from the perspective who placed the woman in the red tent. Need to go back to it as I was not really happy with my writing. But the gist of it was that this is all part of a larger experiment of a university professor.

[SoftGameHunter]

Thank you @SoftGameHunter , @Verbal13 , @RapeU and @LaLia for your feedback. I wrote a follow-up story from the perspective who placed the woman in the red tent. Need to go back to it as I was not really happy with my writing. But the gist of it was that this is all part of a larger experiment of a university professor.

Ah, so the whole thing is a 'social experiment'. Must be a Psychology or a Sociology professor. Well hell, that would have gotten me to switch majors.