Yep, I was wondering how people would react to that as I consciously wanted to evoke the familiar tropes with this one! Sometimes I like to include things that are to other's tastes but not so much mine. For instance, some people really get into interracial scenes, but that's not something that really gets me going; but I thought it would be fun to put it into this story, since these contests are really about writing for other people. Thank you for reading and commenting!Claire wrote: Thu Aug 14, 2025 6:05 pm the rape itself relying too much on tropes that I'm a bit tired of.
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Mother Knows Best - Used and Abused QF-1
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Thank you everyone for the accolades and I'm glad that everyone liked the ending.
It really does make one wonder about the mother.
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Oddly, the thing I like best about the story is the little details about her route home that make it seem like she's a real person in a real place. Up to a point, I can totally see the events going down in my mind's eye.
What pulls me away from that are lines like "my womanly arch" and "dear reader", which come off sounding a bit "Letters to Penthouse", rather than a person reliving a traumatic experience. It would be fine if that tone was established from the get-go and carried throughout, but as it is, it feels like kind of a tonal lurch.
The conversations with her mother and her recollections of past ones are an interesting callback to the theme. Recognizing that the contest limits always put pressure on how much of certain things can make it in, I wouldn't have minded a bit more of that in the protagonist's psychological reactions to the attack.
It's a solid story, and I cannot fault its high score. Congratulations.
What pulls me away from that are lines like "my womanly arch" and "dear reader", which come off sounding a bit "Letters to Penthouse", rather than a person reliving a traumatic experience. It would be fine if that tone was established from the get-go and carried throughout, but as it is, it feels like kind of a tonal lurch.
The conversations with her mother and her recollections of past ones are an interesting callback to the theme. Recognizing that the contest limits always put pressure on how much of certain things can make it in, I wouldn't have minded a bit more of that in the protagonist's psychological reactions to the attack.
It's a solid story, and I cannot fault its high score. Congratulations.
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Looks like this story has just become popular! Congrats @HumiliationInc
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@HumiliationInc Congratulations here, too! Maybe it's time to write a prequel that explains how the mother got so cynical? 
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This is great Idea! I was wondering the same thing when I first read the story.
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I think there's a theme from a story contest here that I'm not aware of, but that's fine. It stands well on its own. The lead up, as others have mentioned, is great. Rule of thumb, if I feel sympathy for a imminent rapee, it's well written. Not that it can't be well written if I'm cheering for her ruination, but eliciting some vicarious fear on her behalf takes some smooth writing.
I guess the RA philosophy is to give genuine feedback on minuses as well as plusses, so I'll agree, also with some others, that the voice wandered a bit. The empathy that came in the beginning drifted off with the tone later, and returned as she stumbled home. Sometimes that can mean the victim is dissociating, but I didn't read it that way. Still can't complain, though.
I guess the RA philosophy is to give genuine feedback on minuses as well as plusses, so I'll agree, also with some others, that the voice wandered a bit. The empathy that came in the beginning drifted off with the tone later, and returned as she stumbled home. Sometimes that can mean the victim is dissociating, but I didn't read it that way. Still can't complain, though.
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Re: Mother Knows Best - Used and Abused QF-1
@SoftGameHunter The theme for this one is listed in the first post close to the top. There is also a link to the story that it competted against. That is true for all tournament stories. In this case, the theme was "Boys will be boys".
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Re: Mother Knows Best - Used and Abused QF-1
Ah, hence the final line.Claire wrote: Thu Nov 20, 2025 2:11 pm @SoftGameHunter The theme for this one is listed in the first post close to the top. There is also a link to the story that it competted against. That is true for all tournament stories. In this case, the theme was "Boys will be boys".