The Bush Hunters

[Shocker]

Your most welcomed!

Ahh, now I understand why you kept the peels on, I had forgotten about the dynamics of canal pressure, haha! Yea, overnight marination would have allowed some flavor to transfer through, so its still allright.

Yup, my mind conjured up some scenarios as she journeyed back naked, haha! I just love naked ladies, hehe.

Oh, I'm actually new to this site. So I was just browsing through and noticed you are one of the prolific writers here, so I dropped by your profile to have a look at your works. This story caught my attention because it so happens that I am working on a story that has an almost similar flow. But I have not released it yet, still working on it, I'm planning to release a multi chapter story.

Anyway, I did post a separate story which I had completed, the first chapter. It's my first attempt, and its different from the usual rape literature. If you're interested, perhaps you could drop by, take a look and rate or leave some comments/feedback. Cheers!
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Thanks again, I find it fascinating why readers pick an older story, and there have been a few of my old stories being rated recently. But as those people hadn’t left comments there was no way for me to ask why they picked that story. I tend to believe that my titles do not tend to be very intriguing or encouraging for new readers to pick up, most of the time they tend to be a small inside joke of mine.

Looking forward to your multipart story, more authors is always good.

[sinfulwords]

@Shocker

Noooo her paradise is ruined 🫪 and her whip!!! Not the Subaru Raping is one thing but bipping and vandalizing her car is where I draw the line

Jkjkjk

This was a fantastically shockingstory I ADORE the title. In my opinion, Bush Hunters just naturally attracts attention! Such a great double entendre

Your rapist characters are so deliciously evil too Charly and Alan r the absolute worst in the best way possible. From the hunting to the vicious raping, they were a team of pure deviance that perfectly suited my tastes.

Charley making Clara force all those fingers in her pussy was beastly! But what really tickled my fancy was when he made her waddle all pathetic-like with her cunt full of fingers. I’m a sucker for a good act of humiliation ….AND THEN he ass-raped her with the fingers still shoved up there! The pussy fingers was a schtick that kept on giving!

The jumper cables sent me into orbit I’ll bet Clara felt so degraded being bent over that hammock with those big-ass mechanical clamps hanging from her tits…I certainly enjoyed reading about it tho

BANANAS

Loved your story man! Short, sweet, and full of sexy splendor! Your twisted mind is a treasure 🪎10/10 and a million kudos

[Shocker]

@Shocker

Noooo her paradise is ruined 🫪 and her whip!!! Not the Subaru Raping is one thing but bipping and vandalizing her car is where I draw the line

Jkjkjk

This was a fantastically shockingstory I ADORE the title. In my opinion, Bush Hunters just naturally attracts attention! Such a great double entendre

Your rapist characters are so deliciously evil too Charly and Alan r the absolute worst in the best way possible. From the hunting to the vicious raping, they were a team of pure deviance that perfectly suited my tastes.

Charley making Clara force all those fingers in her pussy was beastly! But what really tickled my fancy was when he made her waddle all pathetic-like with her cunt full of fingers. I’m a sucker for a good act of humiliation ….AND THEN he ass-raped her with the fingers still shoved up there! The pussy fingers was a schtick that kept on giving!

The jumper cables sent me into orbit I’ll bet Clara felt so degraded being bent over that hammock with those big-ass mechanical clamps hanging from her tits…I certainly enjoyed reading about it tho

BANANAS

Loved your story man! Short, sweet, and full of sexy splendor! Your twisted mind is a treasure 🪎10/10 and a million kudos

Glad you liked it, it’s one of the few stories where I had the title first, aside from the general idea. I think the thing that attracts me to rape stories, is that it’s not about sex, it’s about power, and humiliation is on expression of that power, and likely my major kink. Thinking about it, it’s present in pretty much every story I have ever written.

If that kind of stuff gets you excited, Africa, Bankrupt or SAM could be interesting for you. I don’t necessarily tag with humiliation as it is a staple of my writing.

[sinfulwords]

@Shocker

I know EXACTLY what you mean about the concept of power being the main allure. What does it for me personally, is the absence of it and I agree, humiliation or degradation are yummy ways to represent that presence of (or absence of) power

Thanks for the recommendations! I’m definitely gonna add them to my Ravishment reading list I’m hella excited to read them too, cause, as I’ve already mentioned, I LOVE humiliation intertwined with non-con

[Orientalist]

@sinfulwords I think I share the same excitement as you when it comes to reading content about power imbalance in the form of humiliation or degradation.

[sinfulwords]

@Orientalist

Omg Twins!!!

[Orientalist]

Hahahahahaha! Double trouble!

[LaLia]

I was quite surprised to find that the story had actually been posted last year. It must have somehow slipped past me.

I’ve since caught up on reading it—I like it.

I thought the opening was great. You did a lovely job describing the setting—the little cove—making it really easy to visualize; at one point, I found myself thinking: "This is exactly how horror movies start." It reminded me a bit of that shark movie featuring the surfer girl. And Australia is the perfect fit anyway—after all, everything there wants to kill you (or, in this case, do something else to you).

And then she goes and swims around naked, and even goes surfing, too. Okay, mentally, I’m still stuck on the sharks.

Right, and now the poachers enter the picture. Here, too, the introduction and descriptions are truly excellent. Things slowly start to get tense, and again, you take your time building the suspense. I did notice two small negative points, though: it seems a little as if Clara doesn't quite know whether she’s supposed to be defiant or not. One moment she reacts with sass, the next she’s pleading—was that intentional, or not? And one minor detail: sticking a knife into the ground right next to her head? I thought they were supposed to be in the hammock at that point?

Then came the scene involving the forced fingering: fundamentally, it’s true that shock tends to kill arousal, but if we assume that only seconds passed between her orgasm and the attack—and that she was likely dragged away by him just a few minutes later—she wouldn't have been completely dry yet. Here, I felt you placed too much emphasis on the physical pain aspect; the humiliation angle would have fit much better. From a female perspective, it would have been even more fitting—after all, who wants to be raped while still being physically aroused?

As for the ending, my initial thought was that it felt a bit too abrupt compared to the rest of the story, but ultimately, it works perfectly. I couldn't help but smile at the mention of bananas. Did you happen to steal those from my banana grove???

And then the story ends in such a way that my mind immediately goes back to the horror movie trope. Part 2 would be the classic "rape-and-revenge" flick—in the vein of *I Spit on Your Grave*—where she exacts her vengeance.

Verdict: Aside from that one minor anatomical/logical slip-up, it’s a really good story.

[Shocker]

I was quite surprised to find that the story had actually been posted last year. It must have somehow slipped past me.

I’ve since caught up on reading it—I like it.

I thought the opening was great. You did a lovely job describing the setting—the little cove—making it really easy to visualize; at one point, I found myself thinking: "This is exactly how horror movies start." It reminded me a bit of that shark movie featuring the surfer girl. And Australia is the perfect fit anyway—after all, everything there wants to kill you (or, in this case, do something else to you).

And then she goes and swims around naked, and even goes surfing, too. Okay, mentally, I’m still stuck on the sharks.

Right, and now the poachers enter the picture. Here, too, the introduction and descriptions are truly excellent. Things slowly start to get tense, and again, you take your time building the suspense. I did notice two small negative points, though: it seems a little as if Clara doesn't quite know whether she’s supposed to be defiant or not. One moment she reacts with sass, the next she’s pleading—was that intentional, or not? And one minor detail: sticking a knife into the ground right next to her head? I thought they were supposed to be in the hammock at that point?

Then came the scene involving the forced fingering: fundamentally, it’s true that shock tends to kill arousal, but if we assume that only seconds passed between her orgasm and the attack—and that she was likely dragged away by him just a few minutes later—she wouldn't have been completely dry yet. Here, I felt you placed too much emphasis on the physical pain aspect; the humiliation angle would have fit much better. From a female perspective, it would have been even more fitting—after all, who wants to be raped while still being physically aroused?

As for the ending, my initial thought was that it felt a bit too abrupt compared to the rest of the story, but ultimately, it works perfectly. I couldn't help but smile at the mention of bananas. Did you happen to steal those from my banana grove???

And then the story ends in such a way that my mind immediately goes back to the horror movie trope. Part 2 would be the classic "rape-and-revenge" flick—in the vein of *I Spit on Your Grave*—where she exacts her vengeance.

Verdict: Aside from that one minor anatomical/logical slip-up, it’s a really good story.

I had to reread the story for s proper response.

Clara doesn’t surf in the nude, she wears a wet suit for that, but she is skinny dipping. The only reason that surfing is mentioned at all is because I wrote this story for somebody specific and wanted to make sure she recognized the inspiration.

I wasn’t particularly clear on where Clara is during her self fulfillment, my fantasy might have shifted to lying and the beach.

I think you got me at the arousal level, likely I was trying to express the difference in feel between the two rather similar “exercises”.

It surprised me when you wrote that I missed out on humiliation in favor of pain, as humiliation was the one thing I was trying to go for in this story. But as you explained it, I can see where I missed the shot.

The purpose was painting the scene as a paradise, to then not only stomp onto it but grind it to dust. Again something to do with my muse here.

As for bananas, they are good for you, everyone should consume them regularly.