Self-Defence

[SoftGameHunter]

Okay, first things first:

Oh, and the harder you slap yourself, the quicker my juice will ooze out of you.”

He had no idea whether that last part was actually true. But if it worked for ketchup bottles, then why not for women?

I'm learning that most Claire-humor is very German, but this line could have made me snort my morning coffee if I'd been taking a sip. So, disaster averted!

I haven't read enough of your work yet to know if this is your best or not. Sheer probability says no, but I think I've enjoyed it the most of the ones I've read. The self-referential meta humor is a big plus too. I wish I could figure out who the story is for, but I know it's not me, so that's a little disappointing. I'm trying to remember who's from Canada around here.

However... What the hell kind of contortion was that once he got loose? The guy was bound to the four corners of the bed, face up, then gets his wrists free. From there, ankles still bound, he flips the girl over, does her doggie style somehow, and then has the flex and reach to hold her as she crosses the room to get her stuff? Is this guy secretly Mr. Elasticboy from Marvel Comics or something?

Oh well. I tried to guess the ending but I got it quite wrong. I was so sure it was going to turn out that Caroline decided she still liked rape, but as the giver, not the taker. Eh, her loss. Still, one wonders if she was play acting the whole time. Or if she'll go home, cry it out, and decide that her pleasure comes from the pain itself and the catharsis of emotional release is what she really craves. Oh, what a hellagirlfriend she could become then to some probably overwhelmed guy. Without a sequel, I guess I'll never know.

[SoftGameHunter]

Oh, I almost forgot. Waste my thousand-dollar bottle of whiskey, and the bottle's going up someplace she never wanted it!

[RapeU]

Man, what a ride this story took. What a really unique idea to blend RU into a story.

You mentioned 4th wall break in the last chapter. I was enjoying the story so much that I completely missed it. What was it?

[JTCK]

No, but seriously. Another great continuation. I’m not really into whiskey either, so I didn’t find that part so bad, but aside from that you’re ramping up the intensity of the torture very convincingly.

So what would need to be taken from you to make you rage uncontrollably? Just an innocent question...

That is an interesting question… Nothing comes to mind right now that would correspond to the valuable whisky… I have two small sculptures and a few paintings in my house that don’t have great financial value but mean a lot to me emotionally. But you probably wouldn’t be able to work them into the story, even with your astonishing imagination. And no, the sculptures are far too big for any kind of penetration

[JTCK]

I didn’t see that ending coming either — I totally expected another unexpected twist to pop up.

But I really like it the way it is.

He didn’t need to think twice about what he would do next. He rammed his cock into her drenched cunt and just came.

That is probably the shortest rape scene ever. But still super intense. The poor guy must’ve been under so much pressure…

And I love how the whole thing continues afterward. The ketchup scene is just brilliant and super memorable — I’m sure some of your readers will think of it at future dinners and smirk the moment someone starts working a ketchup bottle

My favorite part, though, is where you make fun at it that in so many stories the victim just cums involuntary and much too easy.

“Hmpf…. Ahhh… When…. When does it… start to feel good?”

For a moment, he was baffled. Then he felt motivated to keep fucking her like never before. He let her feel the entire weight of his body on hers as kept plowing her. He whispered the answer to her question directly into her ear.

“You really think we’re in one of my stories, don’t you? Well sweety, I’ve got some bad news for you. We’re in one of Claire’s stories. And in Claire’s stories, virgin cunts like yourself don’t get to enjoy it when big cocks rip their untouched pussy apart.”

You nailed that.



What I’m still curious about: at the beginning you said you don’t really like the story. How would you write it nowadays? What would you change?

[Claire]

That is an interesting question… Nothing comes to mind right now that would correspond to the valuable whisky… I have two small sculptures and a few paintings in my house that don’t have great financial value but mean a lot to me emotionally. But you probably wouldn’t be able to work them into the story, even with your astonishing imagination. And no, the sculptures are far too big for any kind of penetration

Challenge accepted! Nah, I won't write a story where a little chaos goblin like Caroline comes to haunt you. So don't be scared.

You mentioned 4th wall break in the last chapter. I was enjoying the story so much that I completely missed it. What was it?

It's when he says:

“You really think we’re in one of my stories, don’t you? Well sweety, I’ve got some bad news for you. We’re in one of Claire’s stories. And in Claire’s stories, virgin cunts like yourself don’t get to enjoy it when big cocks rip their untouched pussy apart.”

Just making fun here of my aversion to the "she secretly liked it"-trope.

However... What the hell kind of contortion was that once he got loose? The guy was bound to the four corners of the bed, face up, then gets his wrists free. From there, ankles still bound, he flips the girl over, does her doggie style somehow, and then has the flex and reach to hold her as she crosses the room to get her stuff? Is this guy secretly Mr. Elasticboy from Marvel Comics or something?

I guess that depends how much movement his constraints allow for his ankles. But don't think too much about how much sense this story makes or it all falls apart very quickly.

Oh, I almost forgot. Waste my thousand-dollar bottle of whiskey, and the bottle's going up someplace she never wanted it!

That's the reaction I was looking for!

I haven't read enough of your work yet to know if this is your best or not. Sheer probability says no, but I think I've enjoyed it the most of the ones I've read. The self-referential meta humor is a big plus too. I wish I could figure out who the story is for, but I know it's not me, so that's a little disappointing. I'm trying to remember who's from Canada around here.

From what I've seen of your own writing, I can see why this story might speak more to you than to me. I generally prefer stories that lean more serious, especially when I want to read something that I find arousing. This story I find fun because of the aburdity but I'd never call it hot. When I look at which stories tend to be popular here in terms of views and winning contests, then I could see the last chapter of this story have more mass appeal than what I usually write. But I think many readers might tap out before getting to the final chapter because they think that this story ends with him getting raped by Caroline and they are just not into that.

It's difficult for me to say where I would rank this story myself. Probably in the bottom third of everything I wrote? But that doesn't mean I don't like it. There is only one story I wrote that I dislike now. Even the story that I'd consider to be the second worst I still like.

Oh well. I tried to guess the ending but I got it quite wrong. I was so sure it was going to turn out that Caroline decided she still liked rape, but as the giver, not the taker. Eh, her loss.

Who knows? Maybe the tiime she was in charge gave her taste of something she didn't know she enjoyed. I honestly never thought about what Caroline might do after the events of the story. I'm totally fine with readers coming up with their own ideas where a characer might go after the story is over. So your thoughts on her future are as valid as mine!

[Claire]

The ketchup scene is just brilliant and super memorable — I’m sure some of your readers will think of it at future dinners and smirk the moment someone starts working a ketchup bottle

Oh my god, now you're making me imagine things. I can see it before my eyes: A young woman visiting her parents suddenly starts blushing when her dad angrily slaps the ketchup bottle at the dinner table because she spent to much time reading stories here....

My favorite part, though, is where you make fun at it that in so many stories the victim just cums involuntary and much too easy.

When I'm into a story that I find really hot and then that happens, it's a major turn off for me. I think I've groaned in frustration more than once because of moments like that...

What I’m still curious about: at the beginning you said you don’t really like the story. How would you write it nowadays? What would you change?

I didn't mean to say that I don't like the story. I would just rank it lower than most other stories I wrote. I probably could have worded that better.

But it's an interesting question. I think I wrote this story in November 2024 immediately after I finished Venus' Touch. My output in October and November of 2024 was just crazy, similar to how @LaLia is sometimes able to produce one new story/chapter after the other. Since then I've gotten much slower.

Honestly, I don't think I would change that much. The main difficulty for me was: How do you write a tribute story for someone that shows the affection I had for him while he's also technically a rapist in the story? The character should feel like him without portraying him as unlikeable. And that's not easy given the subject matter of the story. And so I came up with the entire idea for the crazy fangirl storyline. I thought that a young girl being far too much into stories of a rape fantasy author and believing he was a real serial rapist was a hilarious hook. It immediately painted him in a positive light while the absurdity of the situation also gently made fun of him. Then I included some details I knew about him - he's an author, from Canada, 60, lives with his girlfriend, works night shifts a lot, listens to Shania Twain - and I think you get a story that feels like it could be about him while being respectful to him, albeit a little teasing.

I think I wouldn't change much about that approach. I also leaned more into writing what I believed he would enjoy in the last chapter. I don't care much for anal scenes for example but I think it was fitting for this story. So overall, I think the story is fine for what it was supposed to do and I still find it genuinely funny. Also, rereading it after almost a year, I think the pacing of the story holds up nicely. There are just other stories I wrote that I find more memorable and/or arousing. But yeah, I like the story, it's just not one of my favorites.