Holly's Jolly Christmas Carol - Holiday Gangbang

[Claire]

Of all the stories in the contest, yours definitely took the theme and ran with it. I'm really not a fan of using holidays as contest themes because usually that results in authors writing whatever they want but having the story take place on a holiday. But you didn't go that route and I think it paid off.

I think the Ghost of Christmas Tree Past section of the story went on for a little too long maybe but that's nitpicking. I really liked how you approached such a wide open theme and did something truly unique with it. Doesn't look like my vote in this contest matters much anyway and if I had to just judge the stories independent of the requirements of the contest I would have a hard time deciding between your story and @RapeU's. But I think you simply nailed the assignment given by the contest. Great work!

“Well, today the bakery and farm at the center of the case has been sold at public auction to Amazon. A company spokesman has promised that they will use the land to build an AI Data Center.”

You monster! We tolerate a lot of fucked up stories on this forum, but this goes too far! Have you no shame at all?!

[SoftGameHunter]

“Well, today the bakery and farm at the center of the case has been sold at public auction to Amazon. A company spokesman has promised that they will use the land to build an AI Data Center.”

You monster! We tolerate a lot of fucked up stories on this forum, but this goes too far! Have you no shame at all?!

I felt extra dirty writing that, but I had to go for broke. At least that particular future was averted, so it's an overall happy ending.