Geese Night - Holiday Gangbang

[blondiecath]

Good one, like it!

[Lucius]

Good one, like it!

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[joey]

Enjoyed it a great deal, quite possibly due to our daughter being halfway through her college years. As opined above I also would have enjoyed quite a bit more ravishment of the coeds. That said, they were all described in excellent detail and that allows some personal imagination in exactly what transpired, both at the hall and at their final destinations.

[Blue]

Given the brevity of the text, a description of the actions is sufficient. After all, what's the point of using your imagination?

[joey]

This is a strange place in some ways. The folks who run it ask for reader feedback to let the authors know that someone has enjoyed one of their stories. When you do that another comment appears, from a moderator no less, letting you know in no uncertain words that you have no idea what you're talking about.

I do now totally understand however. The text of the story was brief, the description of the action spot on, and my imagination should be checked at the door when entering the story section.

Unlikely to make the same mistake again.

[Lucius]

This is a strange place in some ways. The folks who run it ask for reader feedback to let the authors know that someone has enjoyed one of their stories. When you do that another comment appears, from a moderator no less, letting you know in no uncertain words that you have no idea what you're talking about.

I do now totally understand however. The text of the story was brief, the description of the action spot on, and my imagination should be checked at the door when entering the story section.

Unlikely to make the same mistake again.

It's natural for us readers to react to a story -- any story -- in markedly different ways. Lots of people swear by Leo Tolstoy whereas I can't stand War and Peace, and I'm perfectly cool with it. As you've mentioned, the post you've taken exception to is addressed to a couple of other users, including yours very truly. You've got company! That said, quite a lot of people here are 'English as a Second Language' -- our words may well come across harsher than (not 'when'! :D) intended.

[Shocker]

This is a strange place in some ways. The folks who run it ask for reader feedback to let the authors know that someone has enjoyed one of their stories. When you do that another comment appears, from a moderator no less, letting you know in no uncertain words that you have no idea what you're talking about.

I do now totally understand however. The text of the story was brief, the description of the action spot on, and my imagination should be checked at the door when entering the story section.

Unlikely to make the same mistake again.

As the author of this story, I had absolutely no issue with your comment, though hadn’t responded to it yet. Yes the actual ravishing of the women is rather brief, I was coming up against a different word limit when I wrote this, and never felt further expanding on the mechanics of the rape.

You gave feedback, about where you felt the story was lacking and not doing anything for you, which is appreciated. I have read s great many stories, that I didn’t like, so there is no hard feeling if somebody doesn’t like my writing.

[joey]

@Shocker Seems I might have given the wrong impression about my enthusiasm for the story. Liked it a whole lot, the in depth description, both physically and socially, of the young ladies attending the holiday bash was perfectly painted and whetted my appetite for an extended ravishing. Yes, the actual assault scene was brief but that's the merest quibble, and I had a great deal of enjoyment imagining their fates at their ultimate destinations. Especially got an evil chuckle at the creative final placement of the Star of David. Contest winner for me, and voted so. Hoping you didn't take anything in my original comment as even a veiled dislike.

[Shocker]

@Shocker Seems I might have given the wrong impression about my enthusiasm for the story. Liked it a whole lot, the in depth description, both physically and socially, of the young ladies attending the holiday bash was perfectly painted and whetted my appetite for an extended ravishing. Yes, the actual assault scene was brief but that's the merest quibble, and I had a great deal of enjoyment imagining their fates at their ultimate destinations. Especially got an evil chuckle at the creative final placement of the Star of David. Contest winner for me, and voted so. Hoping you didn't take anything in my original comment as even a veiled dislike.

No worries, I get a kick out off knowing people write my scribbles. So any feedback, positive and negative is welcome.

As for the final fates, I had a lot of fun with those as well, and when it came time on where to alot the space to it was the final fates.

[LtBroccoli]

Great to see this story once again. Enjoyed it on TBV and again here.