Record Chaser - Final Chapter Released!

[SoftGameHunter]

Her virginity was not what felt different about her. Then she realized. She had been raped without even knowing when exactly it had happened. She just knew that it did. So when did that happen? When his cock’s head had entered her? When half of him had entered her? Or had it happened just now with all of his penis being inside her? If the latter was true, wouldn’t that imply that small penises rape their victims faster? When does sexual assault become rape? None of that made any sense to her. In math, categories were clearly defined and precisely distinguishable from one another. She liked that about math. But in the real world, categories like rape were blurry around the edges. That is why she had just been raped without her even noticing the exact moment when it happened. Then she realized what had changed. She couldn’t precisely say when it had happened but she could say with certainty that from this moment on forward she would never be not a rape victim.

@Claire, you're a math nerd and it's great. The paragraph has one of my favorite tropes in rape fantasy, which is that shocking, sinking feeling when she realizes that she will forever be a raped woman.

And yet...

My reaction on reading this paragraph was something like this (North American readers over the age of 50 should imagine Sam Kinison shouting this part): It's a partition! You're talking about a partition. Say partition! Say it! Say it!

The fact that this partition was about parting her is neither here nor there. I wanted the mathematical language.

That is all.

[Claire]

There are so many stories that focus on sex, sex, and more sex. It's not as common for stories to focus on what happens after the rape. We need more stories like this, that offer a realistic snapshot of rape and the aftermath of it.

I agree. I think that giving a story more emotional weight makes the arousal during the sex scenes hi different. But maybe that's just me.

Btw, I enjoyed the math references in this last chapter. One of the newer Futurama episodes on Hulu had a lot of jokes based on high level math. I didn't understand all of them, but most of them I did and I chuckled at a few (my wife didn't understand most of them.) The injection of a small bit of humor with a serious situation was just a nice detail to add depth to the story.

I thought you might like those. But I didn't intend for those to be humorous. I wanted to portray her genuine fascination with her field of study.

And, you've left open a possibility for a sequel. Mark clearly suffers from an addiction. He's going to dwell on the record for a long time and want to eventually try to break it again. He won't be able to help himself.

I'm sure he will rape again. But this record attempt is not something he did before. I like the addiction framing though. Hs behavior is self-destructive similar to an addiction.

It's a partition! You're talking about a partition. Say partition! Say it! Say it!

Maybe her therapist can later suggest this to her, I'm sure it will help!

[JTCK]

What an awesome finale to this fantastic story — really a great ending!
No time to write more right now, I’m totally swamped with work… but I at least wanted to post this much. A longer comment will follow in the next few days.

[Claire]

What an awesome finale to this fantastic story — really a great ending!
No time to write more right now, I’m totally swamped with work… but I at least wanted to post this much. A longer comment will follow in the next few days.

Looking forward to it. But there is one more chapter to come, I hope in about two weeks from now.

[SoftGameHunter]

I'm going to hold off on voting until I'm further along, of course. I've finished chapter 7 and the related postings through the end of page 3. It's hard to judge a whole chapter, but the biggest charge to me was actually in chapter 6, when Claire bursts out in anger as Mark tries to make chit-chat with her. I think in her head she was trying to take some control, however small. And Mark may well have been a bit rattled.

But I wasn't. Whatever else it was, Claire lost her cool and her control. She'd been matching him in head games as well as someone in her vulnerable and debased position could, but that was an outburst, unplanned (I assume) and uncontrolled. He triggered a response she didn't want to have, not in her pussy but in her head.

Whether that scene stays on top long term or not, I have yet to see. In rape stories, I tend to like the lead up and the aftermath much more than the act. In sites that have such search terms for tales or pics, I like imminent rape and broken rape victim. Claire broke, and I loved it.

[SoftGameHunter]

Alright, I just read chapter 8 and the accompanying commentary. I'll say more when I'm more coherent, but I'll say that the gap is very clear here, and the writing style has changed. Less dialogue. Less emotion. More telling. I'm not loving it.

But for the real question, 13 in a day? No way, no how. Not happening. My record is 5, and I only pulled that off because at 3 I decided to just go for it. No, there were no real women involved. Just me, the right hand man. I wouldn't even say they were painful, just difficult to manage at all.

[RapeU]

But for the real question, 13 in a day? No way, no how. Not happening. My record is 5, and I only pulled that off because at 3 I decided to just go for it. No, there were no real women involved. Just me, the right hand man. I wouldn't even say they were painful, just difficult to manage at all.

I looked this up because I was curious, and also because I'm hyped up on steroids and can't sleep, and I found this:

https://www.condomsales.com.au/blog/wor ... RlodY4nPf6

Which says that there's a male record of 16 in one hour. Is it true? Hell if I know, but I think it's possible if the guy is on the younger side.

[SoftGameHunter]

But for the real question, 13 in a day? No way, no how. Not happening. My record is 5, and I only pulled that off because at 3 I decided to just go for it. No, there were no real women involved. Just me, the right hand man. I wouldn't even say they were painful, just difficult to manage at all.

I looked this up because I was curious, and also because I'm hyped up on steroids and can't sleep, and I found this:

https://www.condomsales.com.au/blog/wor ... RlodY4nPf6

Which says that there's a male record of 16 in one hour. Is it true? Hell if I know, but I think it's possible if the guy is on the younger side.

All I can say is, good for him. But that's not me. That 'no way no how' line was for me, not for everyone. As for Mark here, I'd guess it could be plausible. I haven't reached the end yet, but I'm cheering for him.

One thing I think I've neglected to mention is that I'm kicking myself for not thinking of this as a story idea years ago. It's right up my alley in terms of how I think, and a man volunteering a woman to be his test subject is not so far off other things I've come up with. I tried to write one years ago (unfinished and long gone) about a spoiled prince who wanted, in the name of science, to see how many of his army's soldiers could rape one woman in twenty-four hours (or was it 48?), and then refine the method to break that record. So yeah, I can't believe I overlooked this idea. Eh, Claire does it better.

[JTCK]

What an awesome finale to this fantastic story — really a great ending!
No time to write more right now, I’m totally swamped with work… but I at least wanted to post this much. A longer comment will follow in the next few days.

Looking forward to it. But there is one more chapter to come, I hope in about two weeks from now.

Oops, I’m sorry. I was sure I had read somewhere 'the end' And I had thought you had left it deliberately open — so that each reader could imagine for themselves what might happen next.

Of course, I’m happy if another chapter comes. Although, in a way, I also liked this ending. For me, the story felt complete — in my mind, Claire was the 'winner' — and given how strong she has been so far, I imagined that she would be able to move past it all pretty well.

[SoftGameHunter]

Sorry, @Claire, but chapter 9 is indeed very hot. It makes me wonder if I was too tired when I read chapter 8 last night and didn't care much for it. In 9, you've superbly written two characters that are utterly drained, physically and emotionally, and it shows. Mark cares so much about what he's doing and why he's doing it that he pushes himself to breaking to get it done. That's dedication. And that's emotional breaking, too. His empathy gets in his way, so he forces dialogue between them to get the response he needs from Claire. If she hadn't replied, he might have struggled longer or failed. Now I don't know how much he planned it, but his instinct was to make Claire verbally attack him, and he used his darker impulses like his anger and vanity to work through one more cum at her expense. That's clever fucking dedication.

Claire is flailing about, trying to eek out the tiniest of victories in not enduring a fourteenth rape. That's the limit of what her psyche can see as a positive immediate future. And she's probably failed. He was going to try for 14, and now she's made it easier because he has a full four hours to ready himself. In his place, I'd be taking protein shakes and power napping with a loud alarm set for 11:15. Or maybe four hours is long enough to go for an even more impressive 15. Claire's appeal to his pity or to his shame failed utterly. Even if he fails physically, he doesn't see her as worthy of even that little bit of humanity. And she must know this.

It's hard to write exhaustion, but chapter 9 nailed it (and her).


Okay, I'll just continue this post instead of posting a fresh one. I'm caught up now. Loved 10. Not hot, mostly, but it did tickle one erotic nerve for me. When a girl's been kept naked against her will for so very long and she finally gets to wear clothes again, I really like trying to get in that headspace of hers. Long is relative. In some stories it's a day, and in others it could be years. It's kind of ironic, because in so many of my stories she's left naked somewhere to fend for herself. Still, I wonder if that moment before clothes finally cover her again is when she feels the most naked, because relief is imminent but not yet there. They were out of sight and maybe out of mind, but now they're a reminder of what state she's been in. I honestly don't know, but it's an alluring mental state to contemplate.