The Infinite Rape

[peterfrisk]

Congratulations for reaching the status of “popular story”. A badge of honor here…

The story is hot and a bit different but in an interesting way.

Peter! Always nice to get a comment from you, thank you! Also, I saw that you hadn't reached 50 reputation points despite commenting here regularly. So I took it upon myself to change that.

Thank you… You are too kind. An honor I was not really aiming for but now that it happened and I’m part of it I feel that I belong here. I just hope your mission to get me in wasn’t too hard and that I at least had double digits before you got started

[Claire]

@peterfrisk It wasn't. You should have gotten notifications for the ratings I gave you. I think it were something like 5 points I gave you, I think? You should have had them anyway. I just rated a couple of your feedback posts on other stories that the author hadn't read and I would have done it sooner if I had seen them earlier.

An honor I was not really aiming for but now that it happened and I’m part of it I feel that I belong here.

Of course you belong here! I'm really sorry if it didn't feel like that before. Everybody who articulates their views on what they read in a respectful manner is welcome here in my book. Nobody needs to be a professional author or literature critic to participate in a way that's meaningful. I think it's a common misconception that you need some special qualification to leave a nice comment that's appreciated by the author or the community at large. I'm glad you're here, supporting our authors! It's much appreciated. And if you ever decide to write a story yourself, I'll check it out, I promise!

[Mia]

I like the story, especially the fact that she seems completely passive. It always resonates with
I also really liked the fat men part. The screen, though - not my thing.
What I would change: I would provide at least a bit of context (even though I’m aware that the lack of it is the storie’s key feature; but I love a good build-up, it has almost as much of a psychological impact on me as acts themselves). I would maybe extend the descriptions (especially in terms of male sensations, reactions, etc)


[Claire]

I like the story, especially the fact that she seems completely passive. It always resonates with
I also really liked the fat men part.

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We talked about this in chat before, but let me reiterate what I said there.

I would provide at least a bit of context (even though I’m aware that the lack of it is the storie’s key feature; but I love a good build-up, it has almost as much of a psychological impact on me as acts themselves).

I fully agree with you, I usually prefer that much more to. As you noted, this story was a deliberate attempt not to do that. Adding context would turn this story into something else entirely

I would maybe extend the descriptions (especially in terms of male sensations, reactions, etc)

I wanted to cycle through a bunch of men very quickly and stay strictly rooted in her detached pov. But if you want to read a short story that focuses heavily on male sensations, check out You. It's a similarly quick read, but the total opposite of Infinite Rape in almost every way.

Thanks for the feedback!