The prologue is really well-written right from the start. The explanation regarding the nocturnal dreams and the arousal reads like a 6th-grade biology lesson. It’s pure brilliance—the way you weave in such casual details, and the unconventional style you use to describe it all. So, so... "cocks" are silly, are they? How true!
And then, the next set of familiar faces enters the picture: Clair, Eleanor, Eugene—they’re practically established characters by now. Here, too, it’s those little details that fit so perfectly. Though, I think I really need to go back and read your other stories again; in passages like the one mentioning the "incident" between Eleanor and Eugene, you can tell there are quite a few underlying plot threads stemming from your previous stories. Is that a drawback? It might potentially come across as a bit daunting to some readers. I’m wondering: would a "Previously on..." summary be a good idea here, or would that simply end up being too extensive?
Anyway, moving on... Wait a second... I’m currently regretting that I actually listened to that "Gimme Chocolate" song. What bizarre music! Totally psycho.
Claire and Eugene’s "date" was also excellent. It felt realistic and incredibly detailed—exactly the way it would likely play out in real life. Playing pool is such a classic choice for a date. But hitting someone right between the eyes? Respect—that takes some real skill to pull off! At least she’s definitely knocked him flat this time.
It actually took longer than expected to read through everything, so I’m taking a short break for now—but I’m really enjoying it, even the non-con elements. Nice cliffhanger at the end, too.