Poor Rachel.
I do think this could have a sequel to it or a continuation where her boss continues to fuck her over and over again for any number of reasons. Hand in the tip jar? Punishment of vaginal sex. Make a customer angry? Punishment of anal sex. Of course, her boss could also create the situation where it seems like a customer is angry with her just to get in her pants. There's a lot more ways this could go on if you decided to continue it.
Closing Time: Rachel's Ordeal
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Re: Closing Time: Rachel's Ordeal
My congratulations on getting this story finally into the Popular Stories board! It took far too long. I hope you'll get some more eyes on it this way!
My stories: Claire's Cesspool of Sin. I'm always happy to receive a comment on my stories, even more so on an older one!
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Re: Closing Time: Rachel's Ordeal
Congratulations! I really like how the story builds up slowly. You can kind of see the what's coming, but that just makes the tension even better.
It’s a great story and totally deserves its spot among the popular stories.
It’s a great story and totally deserves its spot among the popular stories.
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Re: Closing Time: Rachel's Ordeal
great story. My favorite was chapter one where you setup how the customers/old men at the bar all knew her family and dad and lusted after her. Getting them involved in any future installments would make it even better.
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Thank you groff!groff32 wrote: Tue Dec 30, 2025 7:40 pm great story. My favorite was chapter one where you setup how the customers/old men at the bar all knew her family and dad and lusted after her. Getting them involved in any future installments would make it even better.