The Good Samaritan

[Vile8r]

CHAPTER 10:

The conclusion to this story. This chapter will feature some knife and gun violence. No dogs were harmed in the writing of this story.

After they were finished, Lorne made them clean up the dishes and put them in the sink. When the girls turned around, they saw Lorne holding out what looked like a quarter in the palm of his hand.

“This, girls, will be our last game of the night,” Lorne said. “You’re each gonna flip this coin. Now here’s the catch! If you get heads…..you get fucked in the pussy…….tails, you get it up the ass. So you got it?”
Both girls nodded and Lorne handed the coin to Darian. “You’re going first.”

Nervously, Darian flipped the coin and watched as it bounced on the table. It landed on ‘heads’.
“All right!” Lorne beamed. “Gonna get to pound Filthy Bitch in the cunt!”
He handed the quarter to Eva. “Let’s see what I get to do with you.”

Eva flipped the coin. It bounced off the table and landed on the floor beside Lorne’s chair. He looked down at it.
“Ohhhh dear! Looks like you got tails, Sweet Cunt!” Lorne laughed. He reached over and patted Eva’s butt.
“Gonna give that a good hard fuck, you bet!” Eva cringed and pulled away from him.

He stood up and took both girls by the hands. “Let us retire to the bedroom, my little bitches.”

Sarge was sitting by the front door, whining. Lorne cursed.
“Oh, all right, Sarge,” Lorne spat. “I guess it’s been awhile since you’ve been out.”
He opened the door and let Sarge outside to go and do his business.

Then, he and the girls walked up the stairs. When they got in the bedroom, Lorne pointed to the bed.
“Filthy Cunt…..on your back! And spread your legs nice and wide!”
As Darian did as she was told, Lorne instructed Eva to also get on the bed. “You, Sweet Cunt, you’re gonna lick her pussy for me. Get it all nice and wet so I can fuck her good.”

Eva began to cry and shook her head. “I- I don’t know if I can do that.”
Lorne got angry. “Why the fuck can’t you? Maybe instead you’d like to spend a couple days in the cellar?”
“NO!” Eva cried out. “Please…..NOT THAT!”
“Then I suggest you get your tongue buried in your little friend’s snatch…..and now!”

Lorne gave her a shove towards the bed. Eva climbed onto the bed and laid down between Darian’s legs. Lorne stripped his pants off so he was naked once again. With his hand on the back of her head, Lorne pushed her face into Darian’s crotch.
“Start licking, Sweet Cunt!”
Slowly and timidly, Eva’s tongue flicked at the edges of Darian’s naked pussy.

“Tell her to get her tongue inside you,” Lorne said to Darian. “Tell Sweet Cunt you want her to tongue -fuck you!”
“P-Put…..your tongue inside me…..tongue-fuck m-me…..Sweet Cunt!” Darian said softly.
“You fuck her face too!” Lorne ordered Darian.

Darian began pushing her hips up into her friend’s face, feeling Eva’s wet tongue slip inside her. Lorne stood beside the bed, watching and stroking his cock.
Eva licked and sucked at Darian’s pussy, Lorne getting harder as he listened to the wet sounds she was making. The juices covering Eva’s face told Lorne that Darian was responding to the pussy-eating she was getting from the other girl.
“Damn, Sweet Cunt,” Lorne said. “You sure you ain’t done this before? Looks like you’re getting Filthy Bitch here all nice and wet!”
He finally decided he needed to be inside the hot co-ed.

“Okay, Sweet Cunt, you can let up. Time for Filthy Bitch to take some cock.”
He pulled Eva off the bed and told her to kneel there on the floor and watch. He looked down at Darian, as he rubbed the tip of his dick across her pussy entrance.
“Beg bitch,” he commanded. “Beg to get rammed.”

It was disgusting. No way she wanted to beg him to rape her. He reached down and twisted hard on one of her nipples. She let out a sharp squeal.
“I said fuckin’ beg!” he snarled. He wrapped a hand tight around her throat.

“P-please f-fuck m-me,” Darian squeaked out in a small voice.
“Louder, you whore,” he said as he slacked his throat grip further.
“Fuck me,” she said, with no feeling. “Oh, please fuck me hard.”

“Well, that’s still kinda pathetic, but whatever,” Lorne said.
In a singular motion, Lorne rammed his cock into Darian’s cunt deep. She yelped as his body slammed against her. Pausing only briefly, he pulled out and rammed in again.
“You like being fucked rough, don’t you bitch?” Lorne asked, grunting with each hard stroke.

He grabbed her wrists, pulling her hands over her head, pinning them above her head. He pounded into her rapidly, his lust growing.
Lorne hammered her cunt with hard, long strokes of his cock, the tip just at the rim before pounding in again. Gritting his teeth and grunting hard, as he continued to pump in and out of her, increasing his rhythm. Darian barely made a sound, just staring at the ceiling, tears trailing down her face, wetting the sheets.

Lorne grunted loudly as he neared the end of his hard pumping. Darian’s whole body rocked with his thrusting movements. He growled, raised his body up with his arms, slammed his cock forcefully deep inside her and exploded his hot cum, filling her cunt. Darian finally reacted, as she screeched from the violence of his last thrust.

Both of them drenched in sweat, Lorne forced a kiss, with Darian not resisting. He savored her warm, soft, moist lips. Eventually, he ended the kiss as his cock began to soften, still inside her cunt.
Lorne climbed off her body and sat on the edge of the bed.
“Whew! What a workout that was!” Lorne said, looking at Eva.

He pulled out a pack of cigarettes from his pants on the floor and lit one up. Behind him on the bed, Darian laid with her legs still spread, cum draining from her cunt and dripping onto the blankets. Her tits still shook as she struggled to control her breathing.
“Gonna have to take a little break before I do you,” Lorne said to Eva. “But I said I was gonna pound Filthy Bitch…..and I did!”
“Been pretty fun having you girls here the past couple of days,” Lorne mused. “I gotta say, of all the honeys I’ve had here, you two are the hottest!”

“We’re not the only ones you’ve done this to?” Darian asked, incredulously.
“Of course,” Lorne grinned. “Gets pretty boring sometimes, living way out here in the sticks. I gotta do something for fun.”

He finished his cigarette and stood up. Along one wall sat an old wooden trunk. Lorne grabbed a handle on the side of it and pulled it out into the middle of the room.
Lorne made Eva bend over the trunk, her hands resting on the top of it, and he kicked her legs wide apart. His cock was stirring again as he looked down at the girl’s cute ass.

He looked over at Darian, still on the bed.
“You just stay right there and watch while I nail Sweet Cunt’s ass.”

He pushed forward and saw her rosebud begin to open up as his cock stretched her. About three quarters of his cock head entered into her ass and he heard Eva start whimpering. She let out a little scream as he pushed harder against her and his cock worked in a bit more.
Lorne pulled back, then grabbed his cock in his hand and leaned forward with all his weight. “AHHHHHHH!” he moaned as he sunk all the way into her.

His large cock popped its way past Eva’s tight ring. Her head snapped back as she screamed. He was inside her sweet ass again, savoring the tightness and warmth of her ass squeezing along his cock.
Eva was doing her best to hold herself up, as Lorne drove deeper into her. His thick shaft spread her wide open and the pain was unbearable. He held her hips tight, and he was fucking her in the ass as fast, hard, and deep as was humanly possible. The pain of the man's cock head smashing against her insides started to spread through her abdomen.

Sweat and tears ran down Eva’s face. Her mouth hung open as small screams and whimpers escaped from her.
“Ohhhhh baby……ohhhhhh……I just can’t get over this ass!” Lorne gushed. “I could fuck this every day! You’ve got such awesome thighs and hips, just made for hard poundin’!”

Darian sat on the bed watching the sickening display. Then she saw it. Poking out of the back pocket of Lorne’s jeans on the floor. The handle of a small hunting knife. Lorne had his back to her as he anally ravaged Eva on top of the trunk.
She had to act fast – very fast. Either this would work, or it wouldn’t! If it didn’t, Darian knew her own life could be in jeopardy, but she had to try.

Quickly, she leapt off the bed. She scooped up the knife out of his pants. It was smaller and lighter than she had anticipated, and it felt alien in the palm of her hand.
Lorne fully engaged in raping Eva’s ass, suddenly detected her movements behind him. But it was too late! With a savage scream, releasing all her hatred for him and what he had done to them, Darian, with all her strength, plunged the blade of the knife into his lower back.

Lorne roared out in pain and rage. He pulled out of Eva, his left leg lashing out to kick at Darian. She caught his foot in her stomach, sending her crashing back against the bedroom wall.
His hands flailed, reaching back and trying to get at the knife, still stuck in his back.

Stabbing someone is not as easy as the movies make it look. Darian had rammed the knife into him as hard as she could. The point of the blade had deflected off Lorne’s lower spinal column and embedded itself into the muscles of the back. Muscle is very hard to stab through, much harder than tissue. As a result, only about half of the 6 inch-long blade was buried in his back.

“You bitch! You fucking bitch! You’ll fucking die for this!” Lorne screamed, as he approached Darian, who was slumped against the wall. He got his fingers around the handle of the knife and was able to pull it out.
“Now, you cunt, I’m gonna slit your fucking throat!”
“I don’t fucking think so, asshole!” a voice shrieked.

The boom of the gun was excruciatingly loud in the room. The bullet hit the back of Lorne’s skull, and exited out through his mouth, blood and bone and tissue, spraying everywhere. Darian looked up to see Eva standing in the middle of the room, holding Lorne’s pistol.
She had remembered seeing Lorne put it away in the top drawer of his dresser after the day Darian had tried to shoot him. Now the two girls stared at each other in utter shock, as Lorne’s lifeless body lay on the bedroom floor in a puddle of blood.

“Oh my God, Eva! You did it!” Darian squealed.
“I-I had to. He-he was a m-monster!” Eva sobbed. She let the gun drop to the floor from her shaking hands. She ran to Darian and the two girls joined in a deep embrace.

“It’s over!” Eva said. “It’s fucking over!”
“We have to get out of here,” Darian said. “And we have to get past that goddamned dog.”
The girls made their way downstairs to the kitchen. In a cupboard, they found where Lorne had saved their clothes in a paper grocery bag. They couldn’t find their underwear.

Looking around, they also found their purses. Darian saw the old phone on the wall and she picked up the receiver.
“It’s dead,” she said to Eva. “He never had any phone for us to call a tow truck in the first place!”
Outside, they could hear Sarge barking and scratching at the door. He had heard the gun go off inside the house and the guard dog knew something was going on.

“We need to do something about Sarge, or we’ll never get out of here,” Eva said, worriedly.
Looking down at the hatch in the kitchen floor, Darian had an idea.
“Eva, I want you to open the front door and let Sarge in when I tell you. Okay?”

She walked over to Lorne’s fridge and opened the door. Just as she had hoped. There was a partial coil of elk sausage in the fridge, lying on a plate. Darian took the sausage, then opened the floor hatch.
She felt the cool air waft up from the dark hole below. Eva stood at the ready by the front door.

Darian nodded at her and yelled, “Okay! Now!”
Eva whipped open the door. Sarge came barging in, fangs bared. He saw Darian across the room and that was who he headed for.
“Here Sarge! Some tasty sausage!”

She threw the sausage into the cellar. Sarge’s nose picking up the scent of the succulent meat, dove into the cellar along with it. Darian quickly dropped the door down into place and fastened the latch. Sarge was trapped!
“Thank God!” Eva smiled. “Now we just have to find the keys to Lorne’s truck.”

They were easy to find. He kept them on a little hook right beside the front door. Within a few minutes, the girls were in his beat-up pickup truck and making their way down his driveway. They were relieved to see the truck had almost a full tank of fuel.
It took them a while to find their way back to the highway but, eventually they did, and finally into the small town of Columbia Springs. They stumbled into the sheriff’s office and, tears streaming down their faces, told their horrible story.

Epilogue:
The police had indeed been looking for them. But Darian and Eva found out, Lorne had had their car towed several miles in the opposite direction and left it there for police to find. They were searching miles away from where the girls were at.
It was revealed to them that Lorne was a suspect in the abduction and possible murders of several young women, none of whose bodies had ever been found. His buddy, Rusty, who ran the gas station, was also involved. They found out that, had they been there longer, they would have been introduced to Rusty too.

When Darian told an investigator how Lorne had carelessly left a knife in his back pocket and she was able to get a hold of it, he said, “Yeah, well, it sounds like he got a little sloppy. Those kind of guys quite often do. They do this stuff so often, it makes them complacent. You were a very brave girl to do what you did. You could have ended up dead like all the rest.

“We should have never got in his truck,” Eva said tearfully. “We were so stupid! But we thought he was being a Good Samaritan.”

The investigator smirked. “Yeah, Good Samaritan, my ass!”

THE END

[JTCK]

Well, it’s a pity that this great story has come to an end. But I like the ending. I’m glad it didn’t turn into a snuff story.

Thank you very much for posting this great story!


Just out of curiosity — you mentioned that you weren’t satisfied with the ending and that you revised it. What was the original ending like?

[Vile8r]

Well, it’s a pity that this great story has come to an end. But I like the ending. I’m glad it didn’t turn into a snuff story.

Thank you very much for posting this great story!


Just out of curiosity — you mentioned that you weren’t satisfied with the ending and that you revised it. What was the original ending like?

The original ending was kind of snuff. Lorne lets them go and in the darkness, Eva and Dorian walk off the edge of a 200 ft. high cliff. I wanted to change that.

[JTCK]

Thanks. I like the new ending much more!