Late Satisfaction

[Claire]

For me it is a little strange, that she told Robertson about her familiy. He is a stranger. She could have ask for help without telling him so much. But okay, she was very nervous at that moment.

She is just at a breaking point after weeks of worrying about her future and then it spills out of her. You probably experienced people oversharing personal information for less good reasons.

And even though the mother is a minor character, one naturally becomes curious about how Eleanor's father won this woman over.

I talk briefly about that in chapter 3. It's not important for the story, but it's something I thought about too.

I find it unrealistic that Eleanor doesn't defend herself at all. Yes, she is in shock, yes, he is a respected figure, yes, he has helped her. But her studies would probably have continued without him, she could have applied for a scholarship without him and worked with another professor.

I think you are making the mistake here to confuse the "Fight, Flight, or Freeze"-response of the body with a carefully weighed rational choice. And it is precisely that feeling of "But I could have done this! Or fought back like that!" that often makes victims afterward blame themselves. People freeze in situations like that. Forget about Eleanor for a moment. Read this article from 2017:

https://www.zeit.de/zett/liebe-sex/2017 ... h-praesent

That talks about men getting abused by physically weaker women and just letting it happen. You can wonder just as well there why these men don't just physically stop the women attacking them. And if it was some other guy punching them on the street, chances are they would punch them back. But if it's your girlfriend suddenly attacking you and you have no script in your head for "girlfriend attacks boyfriend" then chances are... you just do nothing. I get that it sounds weird, but it happens.

I somehow miss the moment when Robertson makes his decision. Beforehand, you describe his thoughts in detail, but not at that moment and not during the rape either.

I consciously chose to focus solely on Eleanor's pov during the assault. I wanted to put her front and center. I wanted the reader to feel her surprise and paralysis and how unreal this all is to her. To her, this moment is completely nonsensical.

Here is what I think happened in Roberton's head. I think, he realized that he'd be seeing Eleanor a lot if she started working for him. Even if he managed not to do anything in that moment, he couldn't imagine doing this again over and over for years potentially. And if he's bound to fail anyway at some point... why resist it so hard now?

[Mister X]

Chapter 3
At the beginning, there is a connection t your story venus' touch. Roberstson has got an appointment there.

It is interesting to find out what Marla is thinking in the shower. Unlike her, readers know why her husband has suddenly regained his sex drive in recent weeks and why he is wilder than usual.

The anal sex is surprisingly easy, considering it's her first time. In a way, he is also raping his wife with this.

Quite apart from the fact that he cheated on her anyway and is still thinking about another woman while having sex.

[hypha]

impatiently waiting for the next chapter

[Claire]

@hypha I'm working on it, the next chapter is quite long! If you enjoy the story, I would appreciate a rating.

@Mister X I remember us talking about the anal sex moment back on RavishU. I'd still call it a creative liberty for the flow of the story.

[Mister X]

Chapter 3 Part 2

Interesting, what Eleanor thinks about her parents. This may indeed be an reason, because Victoria was fascinated by Eleanor's dad.
Eleanor ist quite young. Her mother cut of the financial support and she can't tell her father about it, then she gets raped and can#t talk about it. I am sure, she needs somebody to talk to.
Eugene is an interesting figure. I like him and I would love see him became Claire's boyfriend. He is calm and reasonable und just a friend that Eleanor needs more than anything else in this moment. He makes a joke to calm her down.
He caresses her in a purely friendly manner. The fact that she later turns this into something erotic has reasons that he naturally cannot understand. Perhaps she should have talked to him about it. Given their friendship and his past, he would have been well suited to this.
Apparently, she wants to have sex with Eugene in order to erase her memories of Robertson. But he clearly refuses, and she continues against his will. Even if it is not comparable to what Robertson did, it is sexual assault.
The fact that Eugene remains relatively calm despite everything underlines his inner strength. He is a good friend to Eleanor and would be a good boyfriend for Claire.

[Mister X]

Chapter 4, Part 1:

The dialogue with Ms Green makes it clear how confused Robertson is. At least he now admits to himself that it was abuse.
And I like the renewed reference to Claire. Readers of Record Chaser know why she doesn't come to work.
Although he feels guilty, he is already planning his next rape. And this time it's not a spontaneous act. That makes him seem much darker than the first time.
With the last line in the email, he makes it clear that he wants to have sex with her again. That makes it exciting. Will she come, even though she knows what to expect?

[Claire]

And I like the renewed reference to Claire. Readers of Record Chaser know why she doesn't come to work.

Some might even know who called the office for her.

[Mister X]

Some might even know who called the office for her.

I guess that was Mark. Am I right?

[Claire]

Some might even know who called the office for her.

I guess that was Mark. Am I right?

No! I guess you'll have to keep reading Record Chaser to figure this one out!

[mcpa1597]

Looking forward to the next one.
Wanna see how it looks in English (I read Späte Genugtuung with the browser translating to English, but I assume it's different and it doesn't work for all the chapters)
Wonder how Claire's doing.