Milk run

[Shocker]

Well executed as plot unfolded, quick to the assault then jammed along through that. I understand constraints for contest influenced the outcome but it works well enough. Had the sense was reading an abridged edition, the full feature one might have had more details but was cut short. A “wham-bam-thank you mam” kinda rape story
Still well written and emotionally stirred the pot for me, somehow i felt for poor Sabrina more than i might usually for a victim im this kinda thing.
Bravo

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes Wham-Bam is all we have time for. I prefer a bit longer, but if forced to cut, it’s the mechanics of the in and out that have to fall to the wayside.