Milk run

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Milk run

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Teaser: She heard her father call from downstairs “Sorry sweetie we are out of milk, I’ll just quickly walk up to the store and get some. Can’t have my big girl missing her favorite hot chocolate.”
“Dad don’t worry, I can just quickly drive up there.”
“Nonsense Sabrina, you are my guest, and I need the exercise. I’ll be back in 30 minutes.”
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The following story is a work of fiction meant for entertainment purposes only. It depicts nonconsensual sexual acts between adults. It is in no way meant to be understood as an endorsement of nonconsensual sex in real life. Any similarities of the characters in the story to real people are purely coincidental.

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Milk run


She heard her father call from downstairs “Sorry sweetie we are out of milk, I’ll just quickly walk up to the store and get some. Can’t have my big girl missing her favorite hot chocolate.”
“Dad don’t worry, I can just quickly drive up there.”
“Nonsense Sabrina, you are my guest, and I need the exercise. I’ll be back in 30 minutes.”

It felt odd to Sabrina to be back in her childhood home, so much had changed since her mother had passed away in spring, and she had decided to spend the summer with her dad. It didn’t much matter if she studied for her college finals here or in her dorm room, and here she could give her father some comfort as well. But this was just so him, he had discovered there was no milk, and the problem had to be fixed, right now. And the only correct way to fix things, was his way. She concentrated back on her textbook.

Sabrina heard the front door opening perhaps 5 minutes later. She got up and walked down the stair, making the turn towards the door while talking.
“Did you forget something?”
But the man standing in the doorway was not her father. In fact, she had never seen him before in her life. He appeared to be in his thirties, tall and sinewy. His hair was dark and so was the stubbly growth on his chin. He wore a denim overall, and didn’t seem the slightest bit surprised to see her.

“So the story is true, old man Johnson has a really hot piece of ass for a daughter. I heard of you, but decided to sample the goods myself.”
With those words he simply propelled himself on the stunned Sabrina, trying to grab her by the shoulder. The sudden movement caused her instinctively to turn aside, so instead of the flesh of her shoulder his fingers found the back of her sundress.

The sound of ripping cloth was almost earsplitting loud, or at least appeared to be to Sabrina. All she knew was that part of her dress hung open, and a stranger was attacking her. The course in self-defense had instilled in her, that running was the first line of defense, and if that failed to attack. Eyes, throat and groin were prime targets, and she tried to kick her assailant.

He effortlessly caught her leg and held it in his hands, pushing forward. She had just given him the lever to throw her on her back. Then he was on her, his weight pressing down on her, keeping his body between her legs. Sabrina started to beat him with her fists, an effort he completely ignored. He instead widened the rip in her dress exposing her bra. Which he mercilessly ripped downwards, as the cold air hit her breasts she turned her finger into claws and went for his eyes. This time he reacted. With his left he caught her wrist and with his right he slapped her across the face, hard. Sabrina was stunned, this was the first time in her life she experienced this kind of violence. The psychological impact was as severe as the physical blow.
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Re: Milk run - Ravished in a Flash SF-1

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I like this one and ultimately gave it a slight edge over its competition. I think it makes for a better read but does less with the theme. I might be a bit biased though because the idea for this story is similar to what I would have written myself if I had made it to the semi-final. So that might cloud my judgment a little. I wish the story had done a little more with theme than just use it for the dad's absence. If that was the case, this would have been a 3 point rating for me.
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Re: Milk run - Ravished in a Flash SF-1

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My favorite in SF-1. Good writing and an intense story. I liked that the theme was used only to open and close the story. Made it feel like the story went full circle and complete, I don’t necessarily agree with Claire there. Good job Spiderman and good luck.
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I like this one. I wish it allowed for more detail, but I like the use of the milk as a parallel and the scenario. I do wish it played a bit more into the "father left for milk and never came back" by adding a bit of a betrayal into it where we learn father intended the thing to happen. That would have added some spice without much work. Still, pretty solid!
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Poor Sabrina and dad, did he forget to lock the door? Don't like the content of the story as much in this one, but despite being third person it is present tense and in the moment, so it is the best one of this pair.
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I probably would have done much the same scenario as this entry, if I had fallen into this side of the contest. However, because it was the obvious reply to the challenge set by the theme (not title!) I actually found it less engaging to read. More predictable I suppose.
At the same time the NC content was much "Stronger" that the other contestant's entry so I'm guessing that was a big part of why it gained more points...?
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Very good, short and violent. I especially like the image of two fluids merging on the floor.
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Lucius wrote: Thu Jun 26, 2025 9:16 am Very good, short and violent. I especially like the image of two fluids merging on the floor.
I must admit I liked that image also a lot.
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Now this is a nice flash that has just the right amount of detail in not only the setup but the rape part as well. Still prefer longer stories, but this is a good one to get things going.
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Well executed as plot unfolded, quick to the assault then jammed along through that. I understand constraints for contest influenced the outcome but it works well enough. Had the sense was reading an abridged edition, the full feature one might have had more details but was cut short. A “wham-bam-thank you mam” kinda rape story
Still well written and emotionally stirred the pot for me, somehow i felt for poor Sabrina more than i might usually for a victim im this kinda thing.
Bravo
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