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Teaser: Then Brian smiled and took an amused tone...
“You tried to lie, Elyza, and you will be punished! You are going to be featured on film tonight, but just not the way you had planned. And you will be first to play!”

“Play?! Play what?!” Elyza blurted out, trying to convince herself that what she knew would soon happen to her and Julie was somehow not going to be. Then it dawned on her! It was going to happen! She covered her mouth with her hands and screamed, “No! Not this! Take our money! Take our stuff, but please, not this!”

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The following story is a work of fiction meant for entertainment purposes only. It depicts nonconsensual sexual acts between adults. It is in no way meant to be understood as an endorsement of nonconsensual sex in real life. Any similarities of the characters in the story to real people are purely coincidental.

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Halloween Masterpiece





Brian listens to Gazebo’s Masterpiece, a hit from 1982, while tapping a message to his buddy, a same-age, long-time friend that he already knew back in that year, when they were both twenty years old and had natural access to young pussy.

Fast-forward 40 years to present-day 2022, he and his friends were no longer attracting the teenage girls they kept craving for. Brian often tried to chat with highschool girls on Quora, only to get labelled a creep and a pedo once any of these girls sensed how old he truly was from the way he sounded; he knew he should stop, but he couldn’t help it. He loved teenage girls way too much; to him, there was nothing like the silkiness of her skin when he touched her bare boobs or the lovely, smooth curves of her butt. He closed his eyes and relived some memory from 1983. Oh, so long ago now...

As of late, Brian had been listening to YouTube videos of a team of ghost hunters—four college girls and guys who visited old, abandoned houses in search for ghosts or other signs of paranormal activity. These youths had a message box where they could be reached, as they were constantly on the lookout for new “haunted” houses to visit. Their YouTube view counts were now exploding enough for them to seriously feed their student budgets. The students had once clearly stated they went to some college, Brian didn't remember the name and didn't care. What he did care for and liked a lot was... Both girls clearly looked a lot closer to be 18 than 22. Both girls still displayed that extra smoothness of face that will draw an extra dollop in each load of semen.

Brian had to calm himself down as he typed with trembling fingers and an erection filled with anticipation down below.

He finished typing his message to Ron. He was asking to meet him, as he had something to say that was too delicate to write down in a traceable e-mail. Ron had a beer with him in his squalid two-room apartment, at the end of his workday as dishwasher in a Chinese restaurant where the young waitresses avoided him like the plague, for he had two major flaws that repelled girls—he was old and he was ugly. He fondly remembered the days when he sometimes met such a girl who would fuck him; those days were long past. Brian and Ron were on the same page.

“Hi Ron! I again messaged Elyza PlaysOuija about that old Bernie’s House. I hope I get an answer from them. There are two great fucks on their team. There’s Elyza, a blonde and the team leader, and there’s Julie, a brown-haired girl that I’m going to claim first. Their two puppy-dog boyfriends won’t give us trouble.

“This is the perfect setting, Brian! This house is in the middle of nowhere! These college students will be out there, alone in the middle of the woods! All we got to do is to show up there with guns and immediately take their phones and turn off all their equipment so they can’t call help. The girls will be ours to play with and film! I can already hear their whimpers!”

“Sounds good, Brian, but I’ll wager a hundred bucks that at least one of these boys is a friendzoned loser who keeps daydreaming. From what I’ve seen, the girls are clearly the ones in charge! It will be fun to see how the friendzoned guy would fuck and punish one of the bitches, after we had our fun first, of course!”

“Yep! That would be awfully funny, Ron! We’ll film the loser and air his exploits on the members’ channel on their website!”

“But we’ll need Rick and his guns.”

“Yep! That will make four of us, as Rick Martin never goes anywhere without his brother Wilbur. I would have liked better having these two girls for the two of us, but gang-banging them will be some serious fun! These little girly mouths must be something to have around my dick!”

“All right!” said Ron, taking a sip of O’Keefe beer. “I’ll call Rick as soon as you get a sign from our black gems!”

Black gems was the term they had begun to use to refer to Elyza and Julie. They would usually use pink gems, but since they were ghost hunters visiting spooky houses, they preferred to use the black color. Actually, the girls were far from being black; they both had pale skin. Brian hoped that Julie didn’t shave her twat, as he would love to see a neat vee of dark hair highlighting the paleness of her upper thighs.

That old Brian’s house in the forest was really spooky-looking. His plan was bound to work.

Brian could have done so much better with his life if he had been born to an OK set of parents and had grown up in a half-decent environment, but all he had known while a kid was gangs, drugs and police violence.

He was a mastermind. One day in a park, he had played chess for the first time in his life, at 42 years old, and had beaten and greatly upset the man, a seasoned tournament player, who wouldn’t believe he had never played before. Brian had then followed that man and his young wife from a safe distance, took note of where they lived and which type of locks and security system they didn’t have. He had come back in the middle of the night with a hood on his head and a fake gun in his hand—he had tied up the man, then raped his wife tied to the couple’s bed. The wife was then about 25 years old, a brunette and a truly amazing fuck.

Brian loved the rush of adrenaline he experienced when he captured a young couple and had his way with the girl while her boyfriend was helplessly watching! His favourite targets were college-age girls who no longer lived with their parents and were thus easier to get at.

He took care not to commit these rapes too often; he knew that most of the girls didn’t report the assault, or if they did, he was far by that time, but striking too often in the same area would attract police attention. Sometimes, he arranged transportation with a friend and they went to pay a visit some five hundred miles away to a girl Brian had targeted and carefully researched on. In short, he had mastered the art of getting away with rape.

Brian used the same methods with Elyza PlaysOuija. He had learned Elyza lived in a small apartment with Julie, her teammate, and that one of the guys was probably friends with benefits with Elyza while the other one, a dorky, not-so-handsome nerd, was most likely just friends with Julie and even more likely masturbating while thinking of her.

If he felt generous, he’d let that poor chap rape Julie after them; that would be fun to watch indeed. Girls were horrified by the notion of getting raped by a stranger, but they were even more horrified by the notion of being raped by a friendzoned dick!

TO BE CONTINUED.
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ElyzaPlaysOuija wrote the very next day, asking for more details. Brian answered and sent more pics of the derelict house and its rooms. It was a mansion built in an isolated place by an eccentric millionaire in 1888, and it had been used as a rendez-vous for well-off people from the city, especially on Halloween; these fashionable people would go there and play Ouija. The place was so secluded back then that it was still very much secluded to this day in 2022.

The house had its heyday in the roaring 1920’s, then it became abandoned during the Great Depression, and it was forgotten by the 50’s. Long forgotten and decrepit it was now. Thirty years ago, they had closed the train lane that used to pass nearby every night at 10:36.

A week later, Elyza PlaysOuija set a date to pay a first visit. It was already mid-October and she wanted to go and ascertain the place in view of a Halloween special. Brian set his trap! At that point, Rick was on it. Brian was the brain, and Rick had the guns and the black van.

Elyza went there with her FWB’s, a predictably tall and handsome guy about 20 years old. This guy had not much wit. He was as boring as a lamppost and clumsy with stuff—the reason why Elyza kept him around was clear. The youths were soon satisfied that this would be the perfect place—it had all the spooky features a haunted house could have. Brian overheard Elyza speaking enthusiastically with Ted, whom Brian had already nicknamed “Teddy Bear”.

“This will be perfect, Ted! Did you see this?” Elyza said, looking all over the place with eyes like a kid in a candy store. She was jumping and running everywhere as she discovered stuff amid moth-eaten pieces of furniture.

“Yes, Elyz, this will attract viewers.”

“Lots of viewers! Easy money!” she said, giving a quick kiss to Ted and ignoring the 60-something guy who was perfectly well behaved—she had caught him looking down at her butt only once or twice. In her mind, she decided he was a decent old man—it was OK if he looked a little, but just a little, and he of course would never be allowed to touch anything of her estate; such a privilege could only belong to a youthful, attractive guy like Tom.

Brian kept his hands together in a calm posture over his lap. He was hard from thinking about the screams she was going to make when he’d rip her clothes off her. Now was the time to be quiet and play the nice old fart.

Elyza asked about the large dining room table, a massive oaken piece of furniture, now covered with a thick film of dust and spider webs, but it was still standing and looked just as solid as the long-gone day it had been bought and delivered.

“This table dates back at least from the House’s heyday, which was back in the 1920’s” Brian answered while looking only in Elyza’s eyes and avoiding the delicious shapes of her breasts he could easily make out through her “Berkeley” sweater.

Elyza found strength and intelligence in Brian’s gaze. She paused and thought a bit, looking into him and wondering whether there was more in him than what met the eye. Before reverting back to her usual behaviour...

“Woa! This is super-dope!” she said while Brian looked at the massive table. Raping Julie on it was going to be quite something! Ron was probably going to use Elyza on it as well; she’ll be bent over and raped in the ass! Deep. Hard. And painfully.

He looked at Elyza as a calm, dignified middle-aged man. Brian was tall and still broad shouldered. Elyza kept sizing him up; she had sensed that this man who wore cheap clothes was much more than he looked like, but she couldn’t tell exactly what it was. She felt more and more fascinated with him.

There was some definite mystery about the man and she liked this. She even surprised herself when she wondered what it would feel like to have Brian touching her; she would most definitely feel like a naughty kid punished by the school principal.

Later on that day, during sex with Tom, Elyza surprised herself even more when she started considering making an exception to her nothing-over-30 rule. While being fucked by Tom, whose predictable strokes and grunts bored her, Elyza pictured Brian as an old creep on top of her and... she ended up hit by a climax that shocked her, seconds before Tom made his predictable groan and filled up his boring condom.

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The waiting was long, but Brian felt it was worth it. At last, Halloween day came. At the appointed hour, Elyza arrived on site with her usual crew, plus one! Julie had brought her sister Kai, who was a petite girl with a very nubile body that got Brian extremely aroused, for he had thought she was jailbait. He felt almost disappointed when he overheard that Kai had turned 18 in May. He also overheard that Julie was nearly soon to turn 20. And Elyza was a very surprising 23, and yet the Celtic-type blonde was so petite and lithe! Elyza looked just as young as Kai.

Brian discreetly admired Kai’s profusion of dark-golden hair and the incredibly delicate features in her angel face, such features that echoed Kai’s small bosom. At 18, Kai epitomized the proverb "small girl, big load". She wore light white tight pants with a simple fuschia shirt under a leather windbreaker, a shirt of light fabric that would be easy to tear when the fun time would begin.

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As the youngsters unloaded their stuff, he had all leisure to take a good look at his game. He had scored a bullseye!

Julie wore bluejeans with converse-type sneakers of a pale tan. Under her windbreaker -- an identical model to her sister's pink coat, except hers was green -- Julie wore a simple grey shirt. Her shoulder-long brown hair was a pleasure to watch and Brian hoped, very much hoped she didn't shave down there. Her dancing ass was a delight to watch as she walked and moved around, laughing and trading small jokes with her sister Kai. At five feet two, she was slightly taller than her sister and Elyza. And she looked a lot more like she was 18 than 20. Julie looked like Brian's ultimate cum dump.

Elyza herself got Brian second-guessing his choice of Julie as his prime fucktoy. The Celtic-type girl was one of those rare blondes that touched a soft spot in him. Elyza stood only five feet tall and looked uncanny young for her age, as if she were some centuries-old vampiress and the long years never dared to alter her teenage-like features. Her legs were pure eye candy! Lithe and young, and she knew it! She wore a windbreaker all right, but left her legs bare for all to see as she wore denim overall shorts under her autumn breeze jacket. And she often smiled at him. This unsettled him. Would he actually have a chance with her?! His experience told him yes, but his common sense kept saying nay. Elyza wore tiny sandals that reinforced her girly charms. She was a strong-willed university student and an established YouTuber, and yet, her pale golden hair and her all-innocent features were sure to force her to take her ID's out whenever she wanted to buy a beer. Brian smiled as he imagined the bartender's disbelief upon seeing her ID's! Her baby face was well worth cumming on with a big load.

Those students were a bullseye! They were the very best he ever caught thus far. He only had a short while left to go as a nice gentle old man. But the girls looked so pretty! Each second of waiting felt like a whole minute!

Brian had greeted them all by himself, fallen autumn leaves rustling under his steps. The forest had left a carpet of dead leaves in reds and yellows all around the lone house. His friends were waiting in Rick’s van, hidden nearby; a black van is always easier to hide in shadows. They were armed and already on high adrenaline! Brian didn’t message them on his iPhone about that third girl. He looked forward to see the look of surprise in Ron’s face when they’d see her!

Brian pretended he had no iPhone and asked Elyza basic questions about her equipment. She gently mocked him and answered his questions while speaking as if he were a 10-year-old child. Brian smiled. Elyza’s FWB’s called him an old geezer from the Cold War. Brian kept smiling at her and took note of the offence. This was a test by Elyza, and the way she smiled back at him showed that he had passed it—she liked the calm way he handled himself.

“Perfect!” he thought. They’re starting to mock me; they’re relaxing now. Awesome! But uho... What’s this?“

Elyza had just touched him on the shoulder and she stood surprisingly close to him. Tom her boyfriend was some distance away fixing stuff with Julie. Brian couldn’t believe it! Elyza was flirting with him. Was she teasing him? This wasn’t in the plan. But Elyza wasn’t the one he was after. Brian always preferred brunettes. Julie and her long hair of shadow was his prize. Fucking Elyza or Kai would be a bonus.

Brian kept throwing quick gazes at Julie. He loved watching the way her tight-fit bluejeans showcased shapes of her butt, especially when she crouched or bent over to pick up stuff. Of course, Julie paid zero attention to the middle-aged man he was. Julie spoke with her sister Kai while gathering and reviewing equipment.

Michael was Julie’s friend. He was dorky and Brian felt there was no way on earth a girl like Julie would consider sex with Micheal, who still had acne at 19 years old and wore a black “Dungeons & Dragons” t-shirt over black jeans. The dorky kid looked like he was straight out of some nerds movie from the 1980s. Of course, he wore glasses. He was the tech guy. His gaze and hopes kept following Julie wherever she walked. He was friendzoned all right. It was plain as day.

In his mind, Brian decided that tonight would be Michael’s lucky day. “Oh fuck, Brian thought, “this will be so much fun to watch! This Julie is gonna squeal when the dorky nerd will be on top of her! Eww! I will still pity her some and after, I’ll give her my dick as a reward for being brave. Oh gosh! This is gonna be fun!”

The five unsuspecting students were set and ready. Tom stood near Elyza and sensed something that made him watching Brian as they entered the spooky house along with Julie walking near Kai, and Michael carrying the bulk of the equipment and watching Julie’s butt.

The search for paranormal activity began. The sun was setting under an orange sky with blackening clouds, at that particular time when the Devil starts smoking his cigar. It was Halloween.

Brian, while taking a piss outside, quietly texted his friends in the van. His buddies were now on the move! Brian could trust them enough for him not to be carrying any gun; they were long-time buddies; he had known them since high-school back in the 70’s.

Five minutes later, Rick, his brother Wilbur and Ron entered the old house. Now it was haunted.

Elyza was filming herself with Tom in the dining room when she saw the three newcomers passing through the door from the spacious entry hall—three middle-aged men wearing baseball caps and breeze coats; two of whom were quite tall and disgustingly overweight while the third was shorter, wore filthy clothes and sported an even filthier white beard. This lean man looked like a vagrant. And he was looking directly at her with a psycho gaze that creeped the shit out of her!

“Who the fuck are you?” she snapped, her tone showing she was annoyed at being interrupted while filming for her YouTube viewers.

Then her jaw dropped and she nearly peed herself. These three old farts had guns.

“Hello pretty! I’m Rick!” said one of the two ugly overweight chumps while pointing his gun at Elyza and Tom. “Oh boy!” he said. “This is going to be fun! She’s even cuter in person!”

“Hey Brian, where’s the rest of the bunch?” Rick asked his old buddy. Brian pointed at the door leading to the living room. Footsteps were quickly approaching.

“Hey, Angel Face, are you filming this live? Cause if you do, what’s following will be really entertaining for your viewers! By the way I’m Ron,” said the lean filthy old man.

“Hands up! Hands up everybody!” Rick barked as himself and his brother Wilbur pointed their Glocks at Elyza and Tom, who was letting the camera playing.

“Yes, we’re live!” said Elyza as she raised her hands, then she added: “Our viewers know where we are, so you better get going before it’s too late! The police will soon be... OOOWWWW!!!”

Brian had rushed at her and slapped her so hard she fell to the floor. Forgetting about the guns, her boyfriend stepped in and threw a punch at Brian, who easily dodged and counter-punched with a hard left look, like he had done so many times when he was an amateur boxer 40 years before.

“Hey! What’s going on?!” Julie yelped as she saw the three newcomers while Tom was down on one knee, holding his jaw and Elyza was getting back up on her feet as she cursed at Brian, now calling him a creep as she understood he had set a trap and she had walked right into it.

Then Julie screamed in shock along with Kai; they had noticed the guns. Michael was right behind them. The scrawny kid looked at the intruders with growing fear in his eyes. What were these old men doing here? What for? Neither he nor his friends carried much money or valuables. What did they come all the way to this remote place for? Why did they give themselves the trouble?

Michael looked at the girls—Julie, Elyza, Kai. They were so pretty and fresh-faced! Money couldn’t buy such youth and beauty. Those men were not after money... In a flash, he understood and felt his dick immediately start to swell and harden. For of them! Those old farts were going to rape the girls! They had no other reason for being there.

“Hello, young fellows! Please be kind enough to join us and raise your hands!” Rick told Julie, Kai and the dorky guy in a warm tone that belied the gun he had on them. He motioned Julie, Kai and Michael to come and stand near Tom and Elyza. As they did so, he appraised the cute kids and decided which girl he was going to rape first. Kai really tempted him. Those little hiking boots must have poetry for feet in them. Feet he’d be happy to rub against his old gun.

Brian roughly pulled Elyza by the hair and ignored her howl of pain. He slapped her again and sent her down to the floor again, enjoying the terror in her water-green eyes in the warm oil-lamp light. Tom tried to punch him again, only to get hit again; this time, Brian used a straight left jab that landed on his nose and he heard a rejoincing crack noise, making rivers of tears flow from his eyes as he sat on the floor and held his bloody nose with both hands.

“Fuck! My nose!” Tom cried.
“You don’t learn fast, don’t you? You tried the same thing again and you got the same result. Do you want to try a third time to see if it will be different? Elyza! You got such a stupid boyfriend I’ll have to punish you just for this! I’ll spank your butt!”

Then, under the amused gazes of his three best friends, Brian grabbed Tom and beat the living shit out of him. He held nothing back and ignored Elyza who yelled and cursed at him, then began to beg him to stop.

As she watched the blows rain down on Tom’s bloody face, as Brian kept kicking him even when he lay on the floor, Eliza was now being grabbed by Ron, whose body odours sickened her as he began to grope her breasts through her plaid shirt.

“Hey! Get your hands off me, o-old creep!” Elyza snarled, but her voice showed that she was beginning to panic while Brian kicked Tom in the ribs while the youngster was on all fours and trying to catch his breath after taking a hard hit in the liver. Tom cried loud and laid down on the side in foetal position, reeling from the pain with an eye already swelling and turning blue.

“That’s enough, Brian! Don’t kill him yet!” Rick said. The last word, “yet”, sent chills down the spines of all five captives.

Noticing the terror in their eyes, Brian spoke...
“You heard him! We may kill you, but if you are obedient and do everything we will ask of you, I can assure you that none of you will be hurt. Is that understood?”

All captives nodded. Elyza looked at him in complete shock. She never suspected him to be such a wicked person as to lay such a trap. They had been trapped! She wanted to crouch down by Tom’s side, but Rick barked at her...
“Stay right where you are, Blondie Girl! Remember what Brian has just said! You won’t be hurt as long as you obey!”

“And you’re a fucking liar, Elyza!” Brian said in a scolding tone. “You’re not filming live. I overheard you say to your sorry boyfriend that you were only going live at 8 o’clock, and now it’s only fifteen past six.”

Then Brian smiled and took an amused tone...
“You tried to lie, Elyza, and you will be punished! You are going to be featured on film tonight, but just not the way you had planned. And you will be first to play!”

“Play?! Play what?!” Elyza blurted out, trying to convince herself that what she knew would soon happen to her and Julie was somehow not going to be. Then it dawned on her! It was going to happen! She covered her mouth with her hands and screamed, “No! Not this! Take our money! Take our stuff, but please, not this!”

Julie and Kai understood as well; they started to bawl, tears flowing down their spotless cheeks as they wanted to run, but they were frozen in terror and couldn’t move. Frozen like in their worst nightmare. Kai wouldn’t believe and accept she was going to get raped and deflowered by such dirty old men! Julie couldn’t wrap her head around the fact she was to be touched and undressed by them! Why did they have to be so ugly? So old! Why weren’t they handsome like in her favorite movies? And Kai! Julie realized she was soon going to be raped while hearing everything that would happen to her baby sister!

Then, everything went fast. Wilbur, Rick’s brother, took Michael and hit him hard on the face with his pistol while Rick had his gun on them. Ron had his own gun on Elyza and Tom while Brian had picked up a bundle of rope and was binding Tom to a nearby chair.

Soon, both of the male students were firmly tied up to chairs and placed where they had a commanding view on the entire room. The old farts added more lamps so the room was now well lit with warm light. Brian nodded, grinning while looking directly at Julie. He also looked at Elyza and her bare legs. At last!

TO BE CONTINUED.
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Wow, what an introduction! This is the best thing I've read from you so far. You already get three points from me!
The details with which you describe the preparation for the heist are simply fantastic. I can really picture how the guys are planning it all. And how horny they are for the girls.
The fact that a third girl will unexpectedly be at the party makes things even more interesting, because now there will be three beautiful women that you'll be presenting to us here.
Your description of the women and the whole scene has already aroused me so much that I would have loved to read the first rape scene already.

If you continue writing in this style and describe the rapes in such detail, promisingly, and emotionally, you'll be the king of the board.

Hopefully, it will continue soon, I can't wait.
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Blue wrote: Thu Oct 30, 2025 11:35 pm @HistBuff
Wow, what an introduction! This is the best thing I've read from you so far. You already get three points from me!
The details with which you describe the preparation for the heist are simply fantastic. I can really picture how the guys are planning it all. And how horny they are for the girls.
The fact that a third girl will unexpectedly be at the party makes things even more interesting, because now there will be three beautiful women that you'll be presenting to us here.
Your description of the women and the whole scene has already aroused me so much that I would have loved to read the first rape scene already.

If you continue writing in this style and describe the rapes in such detail, promisingly, and emotionally, you'll be the king of the board.

Hopefully, it will continue soon, I can't wait.
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Thanks Blue! This story was first posted on The Black Van and Ravishu in 2022. I couldn't find the pictures I used back then so I got new ones... and I actually like them better. The pics are just meant as a visual bonus. They also act as a guide for my descriptions. The girls being clothed enhance the sense of anticipation and I leave the naked scenes for my words and the reader's imagination.

You summarize well what I feel makes a strong rape scene. Emotions. A girl being pretty and beautiful naked isn't enough. I need to bring out the emotions.
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HistBuff wrote: Thu Oct 30, 2025 9:40 pm Five minutes later, Rick, his brother Dean and Ron entered the old house. Now it was haunted.
I love this line!

Actually, I don’t really have time right now… But after @Blue’s enthusiastic reaction, I just wanted to take a quick look — and then I got completely hooked.
I can only agree: a wonderful and a very promising start to the story. I’m really looking forward to the continuation!
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I completely agree. The scenario alone is exciting, and you're building it up really well. I love stories like this where world-building takes center stage.

P.S.: The photos and visual appeal are always a good thing. However, I would use them to break up the text and not just put them at the end.
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JTCK wrote: Fri Oct 31, 2025 12:41 pm
HistBuff wrote: Thu Oct 30, 2025 9:40 pm Five minutes later, Rick, his brother Dean and Ron entered the old house. Now it was haunted.
I love this line!

Actually, I don’t really have time right now… But after @Blue’s enthusiastic reaction, I just wanted to take a quick look — and then I got completely hooked.
I can only agree: a wonderful and a very promising start to the story. I’m really looking forward to the continuation!
Thanks, @JTCK !

This story's original version was published in October 2022 on the defunct forum called The Black Van. The idea came from my stumbling on a group of young YouTubers where a couple of girls struck me as absolutely adorable and no doubt responsible for 90% of all views. What they did had nothing to do with haunted house, but my wife often watches videos of supernatural hunters and the idea blossomed --- Let's get a couple lovely YouTubers in some remote house where they get trapped. And raped. Kai's name is a new feature inspired from a certain Kai who happens to be the granddaughter of someone really really famous and loves playing golf. She's 18 too, for real.
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LaLia wrote: Fri Oct 31, 2025 4:42 pm I completely agree. The scenario alone is exciting, and you're building it up really well. I love stories like this where world-building takes center stage.

P.S.: The photos and visual appeal are always a good thing. However, I would use them to break up the text and not just put them at the end.
@LaLia , I'm so happy to have you back! A story is nothing without world-building, I agree with you. Each character needs at least some minimal development, otherwise it would just be one cock inside one pussy and that's all. Story-writing is writing!
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"Nooo! I'm a YouTuber you can't do this! NOOO! NOO! LEMME GO!!! NAA-OOOOOO AAAA AAAAAA aaaaaaaaaaaAAAHHH..." Elyza cried out as the lean old fart grabbed her! The steel of his grip terrified her even more than his old creep's looks... and this was when she saw in a flash that he wore a very old, very battered baseball cap of the Cleveland Indians with Chief Wahoo on it. This greatly horrified the woke girl.

Ron pulled her by the hair! Elyza screamed her life out in pain as she looked imploringly at Tom. Her helpless boyfriend was tied up with his ankles and wrists together behind him beside Julie's dorky friend, but the whole expression on Tom's battered face told her how frightened he was. One if his eyes was swollen shut. He wouldn't do much for her even if he were free. His other eye was wide open and filled with something that sent a cold chill in Elyza in this one fleeting moment where their gazes met. Tom was aroused from seeing her like this!

This gaze happened in a split-second. Elyza was abruptly forced down on the floor where the wiry-strong creep shook her like a twig under a hurricane, while she kept screaming... "NOO! NO! Take our money! Not this! Not This! DON'T! DON'T! DOOOON'T!!!"

Ron had gone crazy! He was on top of her, pinning her. She frantically flailed her arms and tried to punch him off her while shrieking in panic, but he grabbed her wrists and lifted her shoulder blades off the wooden floor only to crash her back down! He shook her in the same way a few times until she hit the back of her head on the floor and this quieted her down a bit. The lean old creep, smiling through his filthy grey beard, pulled down her windbreaker, its sleeves imprisoning her arms alongside her body while he pulled down the suspenders of her denim overall shorts while Elyza kept screaming and shaking her pretty little head... "NOOO! DON'T! DON'T!!! Not this! Pleeeeze!"

Her gaze kept meeting Chief Wahoo and his red Indian's face on Ron's ball cap, which clearly looked old enough to be vintage 1985. The creep himself looked old enough to have been about her own age... back then!

"NOOOO PLEASE NO CREEP NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"

The more Elyza screamed, the more aroused Ron got. He looked down on her tears-filled face where she shook her head like a raging blur of golden hair. He knew the girl was creeped out to death. His three buddies watched, grinning like a million bucks, while holding the two other girls. Julie and Kai cried as they watched their leader under the old creep. Both girls stood frozen and terrified speechless by Elyza's distress. And yet Julie looked on with a weird sense of frightened fascination.

Elyza's small boobs gave a panic-moving display of hidden firmness under her white tee-shirt. Ron, his eyes burning wicked with lights of anticipation, grabbed the tee-shirt's collar and filled his ears with soft tearing sounds of cotton as he brutally opened a wide vee and revealed her light pink bra as Elyza shrieked as if she were getting eviscerated alive! And then he slapped her hard, told her to be quiet, then grabbed her bra between its A-cups and pulled as wicked hard as he could!

It snapped broken and Elyza's cute boobs were free! Small mounds of pale soft skin that filled the creep's lust-crazy gaze! Pale nipples in free display for the old creep wearing his Chief Wahoo ball cap, his vagrant's beard already getting some slobber from his awe-opened mouth!

Oh God! What wonderful small tits she had! Just as perky as her legs were slim! Elyza's pale-nipple tits filled his gaze with the solid substance of an old man's secret dream! Her topless essence filled his nostrils with the scent of an old fart's paradise! Elyza screamed to a glass-breaking intensity as the old creep planted his face between them like a pig! The roof of her world caved in as she felt his filthy beard against her cleavage along with the wet heat of his kissing. His ball cap fell on her face in the process and the woke YouTuber felt as if she was getting forced-kissed by Chief Wahoo. The cap reeked of greasy hair and dried-up sweat from countless years. In addition, the creep was grunting and sniffing her breasts like a pig searching for truffles as he licked her soft skin! She nearly fainted when he cupped them and started kneading them like bread dough.

Elyza felt something warm and wet around her right nipple and realized in horror that he was circling his tongue around it! She wished herself to be anywhere else. But she was bound under him by the laws of physics in this remote place where the unthinkable had full sway.

***

Kai looked on, frozen, where two middle-aged men, both prodigiously tall, fat and ugly-strong, each held one of her arms as they watched Elyza's vain struggling under Ron, and forced her to watch it too. Her heart sank as she saw how helpless Elyza was. A shy girl herself, Kai had always admired Elyza's extroverted ways. Elyza was a natural leader. For Kai, seeing Elyza being so helpless under such a creep was as if the ground vanished from under her feet.

The old fat men helped Kai out of her windbreaker, but didn't take any more liberties with her. But then one of them patted her ass through her tight trousers and she began to silently panic. She looked around for her big sister and found Julie with her head cast down where she was herself restrained by that seemingly gentle old man who had greeted them with a smile only a short while before. How quickly did her sense of safety vanished!

Brian watched with a wide grin and a quickly hardening erection as he held Julie and pressed his lap against her buttocks, sensing Julie was one of these girls who just froze in submissive terror when sexually assaulted. He was going to handle her with ease.

Kai was suddenly aware she was being pushed away. She found herself in a corner of the room where both big men were advancing on her, barring any possible route of escape as one of them put his sidearm back in its holster and the other helped himself out of his leather jacket, which looked XXX large in size. Both men must each weigh in excess of 300 pounds and stood at least six-three tall! They were both balding with a three-day beard and the dreaded old uncle's crown of grey hair. Overall, they looked like strongmen competitors who had had their heyday back in the 80s and 90s and had long retired. Their pudgy faces filled Kai with natural repulsion. Their big hammy hands filled her with dread. They were polo shirts, one of a sickly yellow color, the other of an equally sickening orange. Their arms were perhaps even bigger than her dad's legs.

"Pretty pretty!" Rick said as he advanced on Kai, slowly, very slowly after taking off his jacket. "You can run, but you can't hide! Pretty pretty!" he added, blowing her a kiss as he quietly closed in on her! This while Elyza kept screaming her life out from having her tits sucked and slobbered on by Ron, who pressed himself hard on her, pressed his old leather face on her tits, and then he went higher on her and pressed his lips against hers, forcing her to feel his unkempt beard on her student's face as he filled her nostrils with a pungent fragrance of long-unwashed armpits and began to lick her face with long heart-felt strokes. Elyza tried to say something but only uttered something sub-human and unintelligible as the old creep kept licking her face all over while calling her pretty.

Brian was holding Julie and learning how good this small girl smelled! The tall man stooped down and buried his face in Julie's brown hair, while holding her wrists behind her, and began to kiss her neck, gently. "I like you," he said between two soft kisses. Tears were flowing down her face like wet diamonds. Julie stood like a terrified statue.

"Please, don't! Let us go, please..." Julie managed to let pass through that ball of terror that choked her. Too scared to try to fight or flee. Her one remaining option was to submit. Brian knew this. He already knew he could do whatever he pleased with her. He decided to use his power. Ron had returned to feasting on Elyza's screaming bosom with her arms entangled at her sides inside her half-pulled-down jacket. Rick and his brother played cats and mouse with Kai in a corner of the room. Brian pushed Julie against a wall.

He pushed the short brunette against the wall, gently, and he kissed a rolling tear off her cheek while she begged him to please please let her go, but he just kept kissing her. He pressed his old man's lips on hers. Gently. Adding to her fear by being so gentle. "You're as good as a fresh berry! All juicy! Now let's see those young-girl tits! I've never seen a topless YouTuber before!"

"Please... Please..." Julie blurted out and repeated on while she felt Brian's hands on her. He was gentle, yet firm where he touched her, now on her sides, presently grabbing the hem of her grey sweater, now raising it until she felt his gaze on her bra-encased boobs. All this time, she heard Elyza's frantic screaming where Ron filled his mouth with one of the blonde's boobs while kneading the other one.

"You wear B-size cups, young lady! I like your boobs!" Brian said in a hissing voice that froze her even more, as if her feet were bolted into the floor! "Yeah, I love those boobs! Very fine boobs! Half the guys around you must be dreaming of them! And now they're mine!" Brian added, fueling his arousal each time he complimented Julie aloud on her boobs. "I love your nice little teenage boobs! I'm gonna lick them all over! I'm gonna sugar-coat 'em!"

Brian contemplated Julie's boobs through her regular white bra as he held her grey sweater raised above those twin hubs of lust. The golden lights from the lamps gave a nice warm glow to her pale skin and the shadows made her boobs look fuller. She smelled just as good as she looked. Her skin was a dream of softness. He loved touching her and was filled with nostalgia as he remembered a long-past girlfriend. Even the cobweb-haunted grandfather clock beside Julie seemed to want to look over her shoulder and enjoy a plunging view. Its hands were perhaps slightly stirring back into motion after decades of sleep.

"Run run run run run! Run, pretty girl!" Rick teased Kai, who tried to bury herself into the nearest wall while he and his brother Wilbur kept advancing on her, now so very close! Kai tried to make a dash between the massively overweight brothers, but one got his hammy hand on her wrist! He squeezed hard!

"NOO NHAAAAAA AAAAAAAA NAAOOOOOOOOO!!!" Kai squealed as she felt her feet leave the floor and arms grabbing her by the waist! The smell of their polo shirts hit her like a wall of old man's stale sweat. It felt like being attacked by some big old farts after walking in the wrong bowling club. "LEMME GO LEMME GO NAAA AAAAA AAAAAAAA AAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Julie help me---aaaahh nhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaahhhh My father's a lawyer you have no RriiIIIIIIAAAAAAA AAAA AAA GHTS!"

Rick lifted Kai off her feet like a feather while his brother held her by the shoulders, filling himself with the sweet scent of her long dark-golden hair. Rick saw her navel and the outline of her slim hips under her fuchsia shirt as the screaming girl stretched herself and arched her back in her frantic wriggling attempts to weasel herself free from their too-strong grip and smell.

"God-dammit, Wilbur, hold her better than that! Oh shit she's gonna good to fuck!"

Wilbur held her so tight, crushing her boobs through her shirt, that Kai could barely breathe. The strong-smelling brothers spotted the large oak table and organically decided she was having it there. With her fists tightly clutched and her arms flailing about, Kai was carried to the table. Her pitiful squeals met Julie's ears and filled her with horror as she sobbed under Brian's gentle domination. Rick and Wilbur laughed and mockingly encouraged Kai to try harder as they carried her to the dust-covered oak table.

Brian kept Julie against the wall. He cupped her breasts through her bra, enjoyed her frightened sobbing and heard her faintly saying "No please" before he pushed her B-size bra all the way up and her erection-inducing breasts were right in his face! Left and right! Looking surprisingly vast and full when seen from so close, where she felt his breathing on them and she felt that her terror took a new color of weirdness as she realized she was going wet down there in spite of her fright and loathing.

He began kissing them, sniffing them as he let his lust flood him while the girl quietly sobbed as she endured the assault on her tits. Brian learned the goose-bumps around her areolas with his tongue as he cupped those silky-pale boobs and learned how they yielded under his touch, only to settle back down in their natural, non-sagging grooves whenever he let them go. Only to further assault them as he tasted those brown nipples and refreshed his memory about how ungodly good it felt to embrace and kiss a young lady's bosom! Julie's raised sweater added to the fun. This and her submissive sobs. Julie could swear the grandfather clock was no longer silent, that it was ticking again. This house was haunted! She wanted to scream, but her throat was roadblocked with a ball of fright.

"Please... I'm v-virgin... Please..." Julie begged. The gentle way he used her boobs made her aroused somewhere amid her terror.

"Even better! Relax and enjoy your Halloween treat, young lady!"

Brian's gentle words were like acid to her ears. She kept hearing Elyza's screaming and bawling. Now her little sister Kai! She was screaming too! This had to be a nightmare! Julie tried to convince herself she was just having a nightmare, that she was going to wake up and find Kai sleeping quietly in the next room. Brian's gentle sucking on her tits informed her it was real.

"Now girl! Now!!!" Rick said in triumph as he carried Kai's by the waist to the table. He and his brother dumped her on it. Kai kept flailing her arms in panic, trying to pummel the nearest man. Both brothers made fun of her. She was so tiny! While Wilbur made short work of her fighting will by slapping her twice and reducing her to a weeping state of submission, Rick undid her belt and her trousers, and with glee, he lowered them! Lowered her panties along with them! Whatever color her panties were, he didn't care. Rick only cared about whether she shaved her twat or not. About how tight her pussy was going to be. He had doubled down on viagra and was now as hard as a jungle gorilla weighing 320 plus pounds of savage lust. His chest was hairy too. Kai just didn't know it yet. She knew how bad his yellow polo smelled.

Kai didn't really shave down there. Rick saw a most delicate patch of light brown hair forming a cute little triangle of faint bush between her immaculate legs as he urgently lowered her white trousers and forced her to stretch her legs together, where he propped them up and with rage, he pulled her panties further off her! Entangling her ankles as he admired those fresh young lines of legs, right down to her slit between them. Wilbur grabbed her fuchsia shirt and with his big hammy hands, he ripped it wide open! Kai shrieked where she lay on the tabletop, arching her back, causing her small boobs to rise out and stretch her light-purple bra, looking up in panic at her rapist's pudgy face and his uncle's crown of balding grey hair. His ugly face was flushed with sweat and his bad smell were raping her nostrils. His orange polo was raping her eyes too, where she saw clear hints of man boobs.

"Shut up, little bitch!" Wilbur yelled as he slapped Kai hard again, before brutally grabbing her bra and tearing it off using his fat man's strength. The tiny bra didn't have a chance and died an inglorious death, like some inept and cowardly soldier trying to flee and let the young lady get raped by brigands, but ending up dead all the same. Kai's virgin bra lay broken on the dusty floor.

Kai's beautiful little tits are freely moving under the warm light from a nearby oil lamp, which Wilbur moves farther when Kai's hand chances to nearly strike it down! Bending her slim legs together, Rick avidly pulls her trousers down her ankles along with her pale purple panties, causing her to scream in pain as he pulls hard! Pulls everything off! Not minding her hiking boots pulling cruelly at her ankles! Kai screams!

"No! No! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH It hurts! It hurts!!! Nooo! Stop!!!" As she screams, time stops. Everything is moving slow around her. She only faintly hears Elyza's frantic screaming now.

In his lust-filled rage, Rick pulls everything off her feet! Trousers. Panties. Even her hiking boots can't resist the brutality. All these girly items are lying down on the mansion's wooden floor. The smallness of her boots speaks volumes about Kai being a very small girl. Rick now pulls her wool socks off her little feet and these dainty pieces of a girl's charm immensely excite his lust. He grabs her ankles and presses those girly feet against his pudgy old face, one after the other, then once more! He's gonna rape her and rape her good and hard! His erection is making quite a hard tantrum down there, urging him to let it out!

Rick will never forget how Kai's bare feet felt against his face just before he raped her. The lovely imprint of her soles against his mug. And how incredible she tasted like when he licked the sweat off them.

While Rick was in the worship of her feet, Wilbur held her by the waist very firmly and stooped down to where he pressed his face against her cunt! He loved the panicky motions of her hips, loved how she pummeled the back of his face and his upper back in her aimless panic of small fists. He especially loved the feel of her delicate pussy hair under his licking tongue. He kissed her labia! Wilbur was King-Kong hard! She smelled like yeast with notes of sour anchovies. Traces of urine ammonia were there too. His dick was soon going right in there! Kai shrieked and bawled like a lost soul.

Kai thought of trying to claw at his eyes, but she greatly feared what this big man would do to her if she tried to hurt him, so she kept trying to pummel him while calling Julie's name, but no help came. Her virgin cunt was now assaulted by that ugly man's tongue. Kai knew she was now wet and just about to be forcibly taken. Just about to get deflowered. Her face bathed with tears and sweat, her long hair hopelessly disheveled, Kai kept aimlessly beating the big man's upper back with her tiny fists, knowing there was no escape as fate closed in on her like a horde of zombies. She felt intensely alive in her fright.

On the floor, Ron had rolled Elyza on her belly. The small blonde kept up her shrieking and her voice broke and grew hoarse, while Ron pulled the sleeves of her windbreaker off her arms, and did the same for the suspenders of her overall shorts. He had seen her bare legs all the time. Now he was going to enjoy her with those lovely legs propped up! But first, let's undress this little nymph!

No matter how loud Elyza screamed, her clothes came right off! There was no denying the old creep. Her denim overall shorts were pulled off her and down her legs with unstoppable force! Her sandals were swiftly pulled off her feet. Elyza began to feel specks of weird arousal when she felt the air directly on the soles of her bare feet. She greatly feared he would discover how strongly her body reacted to any footplay. An evil thing inside her hoped he would. And yet she was positively horrified to be the toy of such an ugly old man. It was like being raped by a vagrant who looked and smelled like garbage!

And her stupid boyfriend! He wasn't even trying to break free from his bonds! While the dorky tech guy just looked on, his eyes clearly lit up with arousal. It dawned on Elyza that the old farts, after being done, were probably going to force her and Julie and Kai to pleasure her loser boyfriend and the even-worse loser dorky tech guy with his sickening Dungeons & Dragons tee-shirt! Elyza felt absolutely terrified at the notion of being forced to have sex with HIM. She trembled as the old creep undressed her while she remained helpless under him, pinned flat on her belly as he ripped her tee-shirt off her back with unrestrained savagery. The soft sounds of ripping cotton filled her ears as the mansion's stale air hit her bare back. All this time she heard Kai's frantic screams. Where the hell was Julie? Was she silently letting them have their way?! What a cowardly little bitch she was!

After ripping her tee-shirt off her and removing her coverall shorts off her legs and feet, Ron looked at Elyza's raspberry-red panties, admiring those boyish-small buns as he let the anticipation harden his erection even further, where it pushed his dirty trousers even more! Then, only then, he grabbed her panties and tore them off! She heard his hissing groan along with the small fabric-ripping sound as he bared her buttocks. She could bite in the lust-filled air. She was on the verge of vomiting.

Where is ball cap lay on the floor, Chief Wahoo smiled at Elyza --- a wide, feral white-teeth smile at Elyza! She saw it from where her cheek kissed the dust. Chief Wahoo seemed to look at her and make fun of her as she felt the creep's first kisses on her bottom. Something in the Chief's dead eyes seemed to say "I'm next! I'm gonna Indian-rape you!" Elyza bitterly cried, trying to convince herself that "at least, she was going to be raped by white men". It didn't comfort her at all. The woke girl realized that deep down, she had always been a racist. She bitterly cried and sobbed. Maybe this was her punishment for being such a hypocrite. To be gang-raped by old farts. White old farts. Probably racist too.

Her buns appeared in plain sight. Even cuter than he had thought! Pale skin. Angel soft. Smelling like heaven! Feeling even better to his touch as he began kissing and petting those buns while the small girl just frantically shrieked on and used her newfound freedom to try to get up from him. But he kept her pinned down, flat on her stomach with his old leather face pressed into her butt! Which he gleefully began to lick! Ron licked all along her butt crack, loving the girl salts of her terror-cold sweat. As she felt the soft stroking from his vagrant's beard directly on her butt, Elyza wondered whether she'd like to be gang-fucked by Indians. She felt deeply ashamed when the evil thing within her said yes she would. Chief Wahoo kept smiling at her from the old vintage ball cap. He seemed to know how wet she was now.

***

Rick's brother was now sucking Kai's little tits and giving them the baptism of old-man slobber! Oh God! How Wilbur loved those small tits with those gem nipples that silently talked to him like little jujub ghosts of Halloween Past. Kai was screaming so loud she no longer heard herself. She kept pummeling Wilbur's massive back with her tiny tits, her arms adorned with some surviving shreds from her torn-off fuchsia shirt. This while the other pig was caressing his way up her legs! He was soon going to kiss her entrance!

"Nooo! You have no right this can't be happening! No! No! No! My father's a lawyer! My father's a lawyer!!!" Kai shouted in her broken voice as she bitterly sobbed under the suckling violation of her tits and the slobbering violation of her legs, which she made the utmost effort to keep glued together and shut! She kept screaming that her father was a lawyer, as if this were some magical talisman that could save her.

"Keeping those legs close together, aren't we?" Rick said. "No no, don't hit her again, Wilbur! There's another way," he told his brother who had already raised his hand on Kai, who kept repeating her father was a lawyer.

"You're a funny little girl! What's your name? Oh yeah, Kai!" Rick went on. "Well, Kai, you'll see there's a way to enjoy a girl who won't spread her legs out for us! Hey Wilbur! Help me rolling this little juicy fruit!"

Kai frantically wailed and kept on repeating, "My father's a lawyer! He's a lawyer!!!" Both old men forced her to roll around until she was bent over the table and felt the floor under the tip of her feet, and Rick began to kiss her naked buttocks with something akin to religious zeal while his brother tore the remains of her torn shirt off her back, leaving Kai just as nude as Eve except for the thin wristband of leather she worn on her left wrist. Rick learned she wore a tattoo on the right side of her lower back, a dark blue star above one open hand.

Rick's finger found Kai's entrance and he began to finger her pussy, already finding it wet and having a great laugh as he carried on. His brother gently stroked her long dark-blonde hair and promised her a hot Halloween night.

"My father's a lawyer! A lawyer!!! AAAAH AAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAA RRRRRHAAA AAAAAAAAA-AAAAAAA- NOOOOO he's a lawyer I say!" the tiny girl cried on.

***

Brian had gently persuaded Julie to get on her hands and knees after stripping her naked from the waist down and kissing her feet where he had laid her down for a short while, at the foot of the grandfather clock that seemed to nod in approval. Life must be lonely for a forgotten clock in a long-forgotten house. Brian had immensely enjoyed removing her canvas converse-style sneakers and then her grey socks to discover and enjoy the girliness of her small feet. A girl who stood only five-two was bound to have dainty feet. He had looked into her discarded sneakers and learned she wore number five.

"Tonight you're getting fucked, sweetheart!" he told Julie, who sobbed, crushed under a sense of powerlessness as she moved herself on all fours, following the command she was just given. Brian ran his hands on her heart-shaped curves, learning the beautiful contours of her buttocks and praised himself for leaving her grey sweater on. The contrast between the sweater and her pale naked skin intensified the alluring fact that she was naked from the waist down.

As he knelt behind Julie, Brian looked at how Ron was presently nestling himself on top of Elyza, with the cute smallness of her buns visible under his friend as she lay on her stomach, stark naked. Elyza kept pummeling the wooden floor like a child in a temper tantrum, angrily opposing her fate, but unable to stop it. Ron forcibly penetrated her, raping her ears too with his powerful grunt as he strained himself home inside her pussy! And began to pound her hard and deep, his lap sweat-tapping her buns on and on as his grunting haunted the house. This while Tom sat on the rickety old chair he was tied up to and just watched.

Michael the dorky Dungeons & Dragons kid, also sat and remained tied up where he intensely watched Julie being on all fours with her butt and legs in full display under some old creep's hands.

Brian undid his trousers and freed his cock. It was wicked hard! Just above the soft vastness of Julie's butt! A lovely student's butt! Teenage buns! Brian loved the sense of victory. He had worked so hard for this moment! Julie submissively waited for her own rape. Too shocked and terrified to do anything else.

With nothing but pure elation, he pushed himself inside Julie and admired the play between her brown hair and her grey sweater as he learned how tight she truly was! She could very well be a virgin like she said. Brian had to strain to gain distance inside her. Julie, now resting on her elbows and unaware her butt was now protruding in full display for Michael her dorky friendzoned friend. She sobbed bitterly, in a mix of vaginal pain and forced arousal, as she felt the old man violating her in slow gentle pushes, gaining inch by slow inch, with those sickeningly gentle hands on her.

"Relax, honey! You'll see, you're going to love this!" Brian said as he gained more inside Julie, a quarter of an inch at a time. He was taking his time while he listened to the frantic screaming from the other girls.

***

Indeed! Ron was now deep inside Elyza! Pounding her hard and good where she lay on her belly. The blonde YouTuber was no longer leading anything. She had lost control. The pain got really bad as the old creep raped her in undrestrained frenzy, while Chief Wahoo kept eerily smiling at her from the fallen ball cap, the batt he was swinging in silent still motion hinting at the viagra-hard erection now violating her. Why did the creep have the nerve to own an Cleveland Indians cap when he was living in New Hampshire? Couldn't he be a fan of the Red Sox like everyone else? This revolting old creep was now pounding her and bouncing his lean frame against her buttocks. It felt painful, crude and savagely horrific. The worst was the sense of lost control. And yet there were some tiny specks of forced arousal. Elyza realized she was also losing control over her own body!

"He's a lawyer!!!! A law-yerrhhh naaa aaaah aaaaaaaaaaaaahhh! A law-yeerrrhhh..." Kai managed to blurt out amid her shrieks of pain while one of those big fat old disgusting creeps was pounding her hard from behind, filling her world with his savage old-fart grunts as he raped her and forced her to endure his big hammy hands around her waist. Disgusting! Her pretty face now kept sliding in a wild groove on the dusty oak table where a spider seemed to have stopped to watch her from amid its web. Was this spider an evil sorcerer who was soon going to morph into his human shape? And partake to her rape? This was a night to get raped by evil sorcerers.

"My father! A la- law-yerhh!!! Lawyer! He's a... lyer!!!" Kai kept shouting as she suffered from his banging strokes! Rick loved the way she sounded! Sounded like some wailing little girl as each one of his ramming strokes scored a bullseye of devastation inside her. Virginity. Destroyed!

As he enjoyed Kay's musical wailing, Rick ran a fantasy where some big hammy soldiers were taking turns inside a girl like Kai, keeping her cute little head on the hood of her daddy's car after beating up her dad and forcibly stripping the girl naked, and now the soldiers were raping Kai in this random spot, a roadblock checkpoint in the middle of nowhere, with each Russian soldier screaming how much he hates America as he butt-bumped her until he dumped his load inside her.

Wilbur pulled her to a corner of a table while Rick moved himself aside, keeping his hands on her and his dick inside her. Kai swept a lot of old dust from that table as she was slid to her right side. When her pretty face got close enough to the edge, Wilbur produced his seven-inch cock and began to poke fun in her little face! Now! This was some serious fun!

"My father's a lawyer! He's gonna sue you!!! Stop this you got no right! A LAWYER! A LAWYER HE'S A NAAAOOO STOP THIS PLEASE! A LAW-YEERRHHH NAAAAH AAA AAAAAAA!!!"

"You'll see, Wilbur! She's really really tight! The bitch was a aahh YEAHH! A virgin!!! AAahh shit God!!! It's so great to rape her!!!" Rick said, his whole being wet with perspiration, his smell keeping up Kai's olfactory rape as he rushed into a full-blown pussy smashing frenzy!

Meanwhile, Brian was listening to Julie's chaotic whimpers as he kept up the doggy-style slugfest he gave her, loving the looks and the sweat-filled scent of the half-naked brunette. Ron kept up his horizontal lap dance atop Elyza, his merciless cock giving new high notes to her screams as she lost control of her body and was nearing the danger zone where fate would stamp her as a branded whore. The mansion was now filled with the most primal grunting sounds imaginable. Haunted by the eerie cries and whimpers from all three girls.

Sweating profusely under his sick-yellow polo shirt, Rick kept up his final rush, clutching her hips where he watched Kai's schoolgirl's buttocks turn into a frenzied blur, the girl always repeating her father was "a la-laww-yeerrrhhhh" amid her intense sobbing and screaming, while Wilbur held her by the hair and kept poking her face with his cock. Then Rick passed his edge and screamed!

"AAAAAA AAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!"

The whole house shook on its eerie foundations as Rick shot a shit-load inside Kai!

Brian lost control, kept his hold in the crease of Julie's hips where her curves led the symphony of his ape-like grunts until he felt all weightless and his bliss erased the minutes of pain to his knees where he knelt on the hard floor behind the whimpering girl. Ramming the flattened beauty of her butt against him in gorilla-strong motions, Brian sounded like a sick rhinoceros as he spewed one beast of a long ejaculation. All inside Julie! The lovely brunette with the legs and feet of a goddess of youth.

"AHHHRRR AT LAST!!! At last!!! Ohhhaaaaahhggggh Good Fuck! Fuck fuck fuck!!!"

Julie heard Brian and the primal violence of his climax filled her soul with an acid of horror mixed with a sense of self-loathing as she hovered really close to her own climax. Her cheek smack on the floor where she had remained the whole time, on her elbows and knees, she cried and sobbed as she realized this old creep wasn't even wearing a condom. Then she felt deeply stupid for supposing a rapist would give himself such trouble. Of course he did it bareback. Julie then heard Elyza's super-human howling cry!

Elyza sounded like a banshee as she felt the old man twitch inside her and knew for a fact she was about to get filled up where she lay on her stomach under him. Ron sounded as if someone just drove a knife through him as he came... In a flash, he remembered he had planned to rape her with her legs up and pinned under him where she'd see his face the whole time, but it was too late for this now. Chief Wahoo seemed to smile at her with his teeth whiter than ever as Elyza took the creep's sludge...

"UUUUHHH NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNHHHHHHHHH ugh!!!"

As she received the creep's hot love pudding, Elyza felt all weird all over! She was hit by a tsunami of horrific bliss! The bastard had remained inside her just long enough for her to reach the unthinkable. She had just climaxed with a sickening old creep inside her! Damned viagra!

"Unfair! This is unfair!!! Aaaahh aaAAAAAAAAAA NNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!! Shit! Shit! Shit!!! Why is this happening to me??!! Why? This ain't fair!!!"

"Au contraire, young lady! Au contraire! This is fair. You ARE fair! Sweet lovely girl with the feet of an angel!" Brian told Elyza as he stood from Julie and walked to her. The YouTuber looked even prettier now that Ron had raped her.

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Wilbur was now taking his down payment inside Kai. At last! He had stripped himself naked. And Kai now found herself with her back once again on the massive oak table, now raped hard with her legs propped up where she could see Wilbur's man boobs of jiggling fat as he kept her feet up on either side of his disgusting face. He kept looking down at her with his piggish eyes! He just held her waist and kept ramming her hard and even harder! She squealed and shook like a frying trout on the table, her small tits offering short nervous jiggling with blurred dots for nipples as the oak table creaked under Wilbur's fury! The table was just the right height for the six-feet-three man to kindly offer Kai this legs-up orgy. One-on-one! With his scary-hairy chest! Kai was missing his sickening orange polo. Wilbur was a teen girl's worst visual nightmare. And he stunk!

At one point, he stopped his ramming fiesta and remained inside the wailing girl, who kept feebly repeating her father was a lawyer. Wilbur stood there and held her ankles, planting the heaven of her feet into his man's boobs, and Kai shrieked as she sensed her body beyond raped, upon feeling all this fat under her soles! Wilbur then resumed his stroked inside her, gently moving and keeping his hold on her ankles where he kept her feet planted on his retired strongman's chest! Kai felt something weird happening inside her as the fat creep gained momentum. It was as if some sickening current was making its way from her feet to her legs, inside her raped cunt, to her belly... all the way up to her tits, now swollen full against her will as she realized that...

"Nooo!! No!!! Please don't make me your bitch!!!" Kai begged as she realized she had no real will to take her feet off his chest, where they remained planted in this pure fat of manly heat! Wilbur sensed this. He grinned. Leaving her ankles, he grabbed her waist again and took the heat two notches higher, pounding the tiny girl hard! Real hard! Kai's head mindlessly bobbed on the big table, where her own sweat now acted like a sliding helper, where she got rocked hard. Her body was now facilitating her rape. Even her sweat helped the sliding. She wanted to take her feet off his disgusting man boobs! But her pussy felt so painless now! There was so much warmth and heat inside her now. Her body forced her to keep her feet there and let the heat waves have their way with her. The very disgust she felt was suddenly feeding something monstrous inside her.

She kept begging him to stop. But knew it was too late. She was panting hard! And since her hands were free, she felt her body move of his own volition and as if in some evil spell, Kai cupped her own boobs as she got hit by an unstoppable wall of bliss and she wailed, tears of shame flowing down her lovely little face as a huge bomb blew up inside her and she shook all over, eyes closing, mouth ajar with some slobber ebbing out, cooked by her forced climax. This while Wilbur's flabs of fat shook with each heavy stroke he gave her, his pudgy face bearing down on her with his sickening crown of balding grey hair. Kai felt as if raped and punished by some old janitor, on a desk in an empty classroom after hours. Her favorite fantasy. Time stops as she gets hit by an aftershock orgasm, even more intense, but shorter. She almost forgets where she is.

Rick watched the fun jiggling of Kai's tits, feeling proud of his brother. She was raped hard and good! What a thrashing! Her body kept being rocked in short, nervous motions on the low-creaking table, under his brother's massive weight. The fat rapist was losing a great deal of frothing slobber from his wide-open mouth and this slobber dripped down on Kai's nubile tits, for the fat man was stooping over her as he kept raping her with her legs folded where her feet remained planted in the slabs of fat he had for a chest. Rick felt a bit jealous of Wilbur's long-lasting stamina. Wilbur was a force of nature who needed no viagra.

Kai would never forget the disgusting feel of this fat creep's chest under her feet! And yet she left them planted there, right in this butter for her soul, her body now shaken and baked in some mystic trance. This house was haunted for real!

"My... Father... Lawyer..." she blurted out, her long hair disheveled and half covering her face, her sweat flooding the table spot where she kept sliding on her back under the relentless barrage. Under this mountain of an ugly creep.

Those girly feet in his flesh were good enough to intensify his feel of her tight pussy. Wilbur often had some issue with reaching his climax. As he admired those small jiggling tits and the warm light brown of her dancing nipples, the fat rapist smiled a mile wide! Not this time! This time was good! Wilbur felt the strike of God's delight and he stooped down a couple inches more, forcing her knees down upon her chest as she kept her little feet planted in his big bear's chest, standing on his toes for more leverage as he hit his jackpot! Wilbur screamed his groaning satisfaction right at her angel face as he filled her up with bolts upon bolts of cum!

"Yeah! Three lovely cum dumps we have here!" Rick commented as his brother enjoyed every last drop of his climax.

"My father... A lawyer..." Kai let out as her sense of self collapsed. Did she enjoy this after all? No, she had no moral right to enjoy any of THIS.

"Please, let us go now!" Elyza begged where she now lay in the nude, reclining on her side and looking as lovely as she could ever be. An absolute nymph!

"Yes, maybe we'll let you go! Maybe," Brian said. He smiled.

Julie felt hope where she lay half-naked near the grandfather clock. Too exhausted to be aware that the dorky tech guy was gazing at that lovely little landstrip of dark hair she had down there under the hem of her grey sweater. Julie had the dubious distinction of being the one girl in the room with some clothes left on her. Maybe he'll let them go. Brian was so gentle! She felt his gaze returning to her legs and feet and began to question her hope. Brian smiled at her.

On the discarded ball cap, Chief Wahoo was smiling too.

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TO BE CONTINUED.

Note: What European readers may not be aware of --- Chief Wahoo used to be the logo for the Cleveland Indians baseball team in Major League Baseball. It was retired after the 2018 season for being deemed an offensive caricature of First Nations, and the team even changed their name from Indians to Guardians in 2022, which made a great many fans angry, and many wokes happy.
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Re: Halloween Masterpiece

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@Histbuff, my friend!
Oh my God, what a night. I'm lying in bed with severe leg pain, unable to sleep, tossing and turning from one side to the other. I keep checking RavishA to see if there's anything new to read. I so desperately hoped there would be a continuation of your story. And indeed: shortly before 5 a.m., it finally happened: Histbuff published the next part of his Halloween story!
I wide open my eyes in the dark to be able to read the story better. I have it translated into German. I read the story word for word (which I don't usually do!). I devour every single word, letting the flowery descriptions melt on my tongue like the finest ice cream.
My goodness, how do you manage to write like that? So vivid, every word melts on my tongue like butter. What you're creating here is a work of art unlike any other.
Mere descriptions of rape become narratives that show us, down to the last detail, the feelings of the young women, but also those of the "old men." Little things, like the stopped clock that suddenly seems to come back to life, complete the picture.
Where do you get the time and the ideas to write all of this?

After reading the story on my smartphone, I got up, went downstairs to the living room, and read it again at my leisure on my notebook. I was hard like the "old men," I empathized with them. I kissed the girls' feet, touched their breasts. And then I fucked Elyza. At the description of how Ron turned her onto her stomach and pulled off her pants, ripped off her T-shirt, and finally her panties, so that he could admire her white, boyish bottom. The moment he lay on top of her and penetrated her, I exploded. However, I didn't imagine fucking her in her certainly also tight pussy from the front. No, as an assman, I naturally took her from behind. What a feeling.

Dear @Histbuff, you've written many good stories before. But mostly they were about mass rapes somewhere in Africa, where one soldier after another raped white women they had captured. Those were good stories too.

But this is something completely different. This isn't just a string of rapes; it's the description of pure lust in its highest form. The comparisons you make are unique. Every one of your sentences is a work of art.

Even though this story is certainly far from finished, for me it already belongs in the "Hall of Fame" of rape stories.

And I'm excited to see how it continues.
May I make a request: I would like a very precise and detailed description of how Elizy is anally deflowered. It doesn't matter which of the men does it.

And now I'm going to go back to bed and replay the whole scene in my head again. What a night.
Thank you so much for it!
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