Trust (280 words)

[rdodger]

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Trust

by Rajah Dodger {rdodger@hotmail.com} (c) 2006, 2009

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"She *trusts* you."

My fraternity brother Greg had just given me the *strangest* request I could imagine. He said his girlfriend wanted to be spanked and she wanted *me* to do it.

Now I'm not overly handsome and she'd never taken particular note of me before, so this seemed odd. But a brother is a brother, so I found myself Friday night sitting in Greg's apartment, having a rum and coke and waiting for his girlfriend Elena to tell us she was ready. In a little bit she called out, and Greg ushered me into the back room. Elena was in there, naked, bent over a sofa with her feet wide apart, her brown bottom cheeks glistening with oil or lotion. I could see *everything* from the dark winking rosebud to the swollen pussylips dangling between her spread thighs. I started to back up but Greg was right behind me. "Go on," he urged me, "she *trusts* you."

I moved forward, conscious of the erection trapped in my slacks. I flexed my hand, then slapped her right cheek tentatively. "Harder, *please*," she said. My next slap had more meat and sensation to it, and I soon found myself in a regular rhythm, alternating cheeks until Elena was twisting and rocking and my palms hurt.

My pants were around my ankles; when did that happen? Greg had one hand around my cock, thumbing the vein under the shaft, his other hand on my bottom pushing me toward Elena's flared rosebud.

The sensation inside her squirming ass was incredible; I moaned louder than Elena did. I felt Greg's finger slide into my bottom while I came. He was murmuring, "she likes *company*".

/ END /

Endnote: Composed for the 2006 deirdre Festival at the alt.sex.stories.moderated newsgroup

All feedback accepted!

[Claire]

A quick note first:

Now I'm not overly handsome and he'd never taken particular note of me before, so this seemed odd.

Was that meant to supposed to say she?

I checked this one out because I believe this is the shortest story on the board. I was expecting some twist there at the end that didn't come. I might be missing the context of the "2006 deirdre Festival at the alt.sex.stories.moderated newsgroup", but to me this feels just very short without the brevity having a larger point? I would love to know if I'm missing something here and what you, @rdodger, think about this story. 2006 was a long time ago. Would you still write it this way?

[SoftGameHunter]

I usually take it on trust that a story will have a gay tag if one is warranted.

[rdodger]

2006 was a long time ago. Would you still write it this way?

(a) Yes that should have been "she", I missed that on at least three proof sessions. And I had better eyesight then. Oh well. I've fixed it here, and at some point I'll go into my official library file and update it there as well.

(b) Dierdre was known for writing stories where people found themselves walking or sliding into disturbing erotic sexual situations, and sometimes unable to distance themselves from the effects of watching and/or participating. Her stories also almost always ended with an emphasized word set off by asterisks. I don't know whether she used that for boldface, for italics, or just to force the eyes to dwell there.

If I were writing Trust today, it would be about half again as long; I'd include more than just the spanking before going full Zoot. (Holy Grail reference, if you have to ask.) On review, from 2005 to mid-2006 I was putting out sub-1000-word stories. Just the way my creative side was working, I guess. Anyway, I was aiming for the atmosphere and the quivery ending. Dierdre's stories were longer. Bitbard had what purported to be the full set of Dierdre's stories up at ASSTR, but that was then and now the Wayback Machine has blocked ASSTR content. Bummer. I managed to find one on the net at: protovision.textfiles.com/sex/EROTICA/M/mouth.txt

[rdodger]

I usually take it on trust that a story will have a gay tag if one is warranted.

Sorry SGH. The word should have been "she" so no "gay" tag was actually needed. My tagging / topiccodes has never been terribly consistent. I may some day go through my library and replace the existing codes, but any writing motivation I have is limited to expanding current draft stories and attempting to get a qualifying story written starting Sunday for the Flash Erotica challenge.

RD

[SoftGameHunter]

I usually take it on trust that a story will have a gay tag if one is warranted.

Sorry SGH. The word should have been "she" so no "gay" tag was actually needed. My tagging / topiccodes has never been terribly consistent. I may some day go through my library and replace the existing codes, but any writing motivation I have is limited to expanding current draft stories and attempting to get a qualifying story written starting Sunday for the Flash Erotica challenge.

RD

I'm looking at the last two paragraphs. Unless Greg is a chick, that's not just a pronoun thing. It's fine if you want to post LGTBQ here, but a little heads-up please.

[RapeU]

I usually take it on trust that a story will have a gay tag if one is warranted.

Sorry SGH. The word should have been "she" so no "gay" tag was actually needed. My tagging / topiccodes has never been terribly consistent. I may some day go through my library and replace the existing codes, but any writing motivation I have is limited to expanding current draft stories and attempting to get a qualifying story written starting Sunday for the Flash Erotica challenge.

RD

I'm looking at the last two paragraphs. Unless Greg is a chick, that's not just a pronoun thing. It's fine if you want to post LGTBQ here, but a little heads-up please.

A bit of clarification here. There's only 4 mandatory tags: Language, Completion, Length, and Consent. The rest of the tags are optional and as long as there's no more than 10 it's generally fine. It's good to encourage people to add tags as a reminder, but they don't have to add optional tags if they don't want to.

[SoftGameHunter]

What RapeU said. I'm begging, not demanding.

[rdodger]

I checked this one out because I believe this is the shortest story on the board.

I've got one that comes in at 256 words but it violates the character age limit so I can't present it here.

So instead I'm posting a 6500 word story, just to demonstrate that I do occasionally venture outside my 1000-2000 comfort zone.