I have decided to do the same thing I did in Kristen’s Board contest.
The theme was consensual. We had a mind control story and it’s typical for mind control to not be consensual. However, it’s not explicitly stated in the story that the protagonist used his power on the woman. The woman even mentioned she didn’t want a Vietnamese man. In this case I included the story in the contest because with some editing the case could be made that the story is consensual. I let the community decide in this instance.
Additionally if I remember right there was a German contest where someone didn’t include the theme and it was still included to let the community decide.
@Shocker used a clear character from The Blowout but accidentally didn’t make her the protagonist. The story could be edited to fit this situation without anything really changing. I will include it and the community can decide on the outcome.
There was another story in the KB contest that I did not take. One where the whole thing was about a murder. Murder is clearly not consensual. The story was humorous, and I think would have been better received had it not been framed as a KB contest entry.
In this case I won’t take
@LtBroccoli’s story. The POV appears to be omniscient while also jumping from one person to the next. That wouldn’t be a problem if you clearly used a character from The Most Delectable Game. Reading your story and I do not see a character from there. What this appears to be is a completely separate story based on my comment that this could be expanded similar to how the MCU handles timelines. And the MCU even used an established character from prior movies to do it! Loki! I don’t see an established character from the prior story here. It’s possible I missed it, but in all other entries the authors clearly stated what character was used either before or after the story. You didn’t.
@LtBroccoli i will send you an additional pm at some point today when time allows.