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The Library

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The author of this story has read and accepted the rules for posting stories. They guarantee that the following story depicts none of the themes listed in the Forbidden Content section of the rules.

The following story is a work of fiction meant for entertainment purposes only. All sexual acts depicted in this story take place between consenting adults. Any similarities of the characters in the story to real people are purely coincidental.
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Title: The Library

Preview: Leah, a college freshman asks her close friend Max to come with her to her local library.

Author: Vera Smithy

Tags: #Creampie #Breeding #Public #Free Use #NSFW

Content Warnings: #Age Gap

***Everything said in whispers will be in italics.***
***Leah's dialogue will be in green***
*** Max's dialogue will be in blue.***
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Hi Everyone! This is not as dark or extreme as my "Home" Series, but I feel it's content is still just as titillating. As always I'm happy to get feedback or just any comments on the narrative itself. I hope you enjoy this self contained outing. I'm pretty sure I will probably do other self contained stories covering different scenarios and different vibes of kink or eroticism in the future. But for now, I hope you enjoy "The Library"
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I fell hard for you the moment we met.

I met you couple of weeks after I moved here for college roughly 6 months ago. It was fall, when the air was starting to chill and smell like hickory.

I managed to snag a room to rent in a 3 bedroom house with two girls at the same college as me.

It's a great place. Nice sized rooms with relatively thick walls for privacy. A back yard (I like gardening). Walking distance to downtown and campus. I love that it's an older building. Has character and history. If I could, I'd live in a haunted house. I bet the rent would be even lower.

One of my housemates, Charlie, I don't know too well, even after 6 months. She's chronically almost never home. If she's not at work bartending or class, she's working on her thesis. She's a double major, but I couldn't tell you in what. I'm not even sure she sleeps. Other than that, no idea what she's like. My other roommate is... Donna.

Donna, has what I call "Golden Retriever energy". Very outgoing, thrives in crowds, can make friends with anyone. I however have "Hermetic House Cat Energy". She wasted no time getting to know me though. Donna has a gift managing to get people to go along with her whims. She managed to cajole me to come out after wearing me down about 2 weeks after I moved in.

"It'll be good for you! It's just perfect. It's a place for people with nerdy interests like you.😃"

"I don't really like loud places Donna- 🫩🫤"

"Don't worry It'll be fun! 😃"

"I guess I could give it a try 🫤😑"

"That's the spirit. Also, you never know, you might make a new friend there. 😏😜"

"😮‍💨If you say so"

Donna has a gift being for being at once part pushy and part endearing. She's a bit of a busy-body, and impulsive, but, she has a good heart. In spite of her clashing with my energy, I like her.

So, the bar. The bar was certainly made for people with nerdy interests in mind. Like, they have a ton of different consoles that anyone can play on and a whole bunch of new and older titles. There's even a table for DnD. They sell alcohol and caffeinated drinks.

I just order a water because:
1) I'm 19
2) I'm not a fan of caffeine. Doesn't do favors for my anxiety.

Don't get me wrong, as cool as this place is, I wasn't really having a good time.

I like to play a game every once in a while, but honestly, I'm way more into books. Plus, I really don't like being in crowds. God, there were so many people and flashing colors from the tvs and music playing I didn't like. It was overwhelming.

I looked for Donna in the crowd. I found her at the gaming area of the bar. She, was sitting in a beanbag chair next to some jock looking guy in front of one of the gaming screens. Probably was playing something before Donna showed up and flirted it up with him. I didn't wanna ruin her quest for dick. Honestly, Kudos to her. Hope she catches her quarry.

I had to go for some air though. The relief I felt walking into the brisk, quiet, night waiting outside that door was a balm to my senses. I put my back against the brick next to the entry door. The soft, yellow light coming from the street lamp above felt like a circle of safety.

I took some deep breaths to center and ground myself. The cool crisp air and the fog of my breath with every exhale was soothing. I wasn't really sure if I wanted to go back inside. I didn't wanna leave Donna here either. 😥

"Having a tough time in there?"

"You can say that again".

That's when I laid eyes on you.

You were leaning against the same wall as me. You were just outside my ring of light, a little obscured but close enough to see details. You had a little cigarette between your fingers.

You looked so cool and mysterious in your worn, brown leather jacket and dark jeans, and your glasses being illuminated by the glare of the light.

"You gonna be okay?"

"Yeah, I just... don't wanna go back in there. Not yet."

"I get it. I'm not exactly itching to go back in either."

"Good to know I'm not the only one who feels that way 😅"

You flicked your cigarette to the ground and stamped it out. You stepped towards me into the light and I saw you clearly. Your eyes no longer hid behind the glare of the light against your glasses. They were brown with flecks of blue. The first and only thing in my mind was, "God you are beautiful."

I just wanted to kiss you and feel all of you and never stop, but I was struggling with a nearly dead social battery and sensory overload.

You hold out your hand to me to shake.

"I'm Max."

I met your hand with mine.

"Leah"

"Good to meet you."

You had a firm grip as you shook my hand.

"I'm waiting for a friend to pick me up. Wanna keep me company while I wait?"

I hear the music from the bar softly eminate and pulse from behind the barrier of its door and walls.

Yeah, no thanks to that.

"I can do that " 😅

We got to talking.

I admired your passion when you talked about the games or movies you love. I was so excited to learn we shared a love for books. I found you warm and easy to talk to.

I didn't know how long it went on for, but it felt at once long and too quick. We exchanged numbers before you had to go.

6 months later and we are close friends. We hangout pretty regularly. As much as Im down bad for him, I'm also grateful to have someone that I can talk about anything with. Whether it's just talking about our shared passions, or deep, personal stuff and things NOT get weird afterwards.

But make no mistake, you turn me on and there's no off switch in sight.

I get turned on with how your tallness makes me feel itty bitty. How smart your glasses make you look. How handsome your scruffy face is, or how your semi messy hair looks, no matter what occasion or time of day it never looks like it doesn't go. All you have to do is wear one of your form fitting long sleeve shirts and jeans that makes your butt look amazing and I feel like the wolf in a Tex Avery cartoon.

You're so sophisticated and mature and so cool. At least compared to me. I don't exactly have the sex appeal or fashion sense of some elegant, sexy model. Someone much more suited for you.

I'm Rubenesquely curvy and soft. I often say I'm like a short, hourglass shaped marshmallow.

I have a soft, round face with eyes that's not ill suited for sexy or glamorous eye makeup. I usually just wear some basic eye liner. I have a petite mouth like a musty 1920's silent movie actress. I wish I looked like those models with perfect flat stomachs, lush hair, amazing curves, and full, pouty lips like the women on IG.

I dress in comfy clothes, usually like shorts and shirts. I've been trying to be a bit more fashion forward but I tend to lean more into a cottage core look, instead of something that would match with you. I'm nothing like what would suit you.

I'm not sure how you see me. You and I have spent a lot of time together. We go over each other's places, watching and making fun of bad movies, eating takeout or playing the odd video game. You call me kiddo, even though I'm 19. I guess I must seem like a little sister to you, you being 29 and all. I'm certain you could never want someone like me. If you did, I'd know by now.

I know we enjoy spending time together. I know you care about me. But, I can say that about any of the friends I have back home. I know you like me, but do you like me, the same way?

I tell myself that I'm happy to just be your friend. But I'd be lying if I said I haven't touched myself fantasizing about you touching me.

But that's not important just this moment.

Today, we are in a library because I like to go on weekends to find something new to read. This place has got an all around pretty great selection. Plus, it's much cheaper than buying, because amassing the physical collection I want in this economy? Might as well save up for a flying car.

It's fun to go with a friend, but Ive yet to find my people on campus and my relationship with my housemates is lukewarm at best.

"Hey kiddo!"

I turn and see you walking up the stairs towards me. You're wearing a form fitting flannel shirt with a plain black Tee underneath with the sleeves rolled up and the jeans I love. I steal myself to not show how hot you look. Objectively I know that outfit is mundane, but damn you make it look so fucking GOOD!

"Thanks for coming with me today Max! You are so sweet keeping me company."

"Of course. Never a bad time to get a good book."

I'm wearing an oversized sweater over a simple skater dress and ballet flats. I'm feeling cute, soft and feminine. The complete opposite of your aesthetic.

"It's a little hot for a sweater isn't it"
"I brought it because it's chilly in the library."
That's not entirely true. I mean, It is chilly, but really it's because I couldn't find a bra to wear today and hoped the loose fit would hide it.

"Well, it's a good look on you for sure. Very cute."

Squuuueeeeeeeeeeeee

"Thanks. You look good too. I mean, it suits you."

Ugh I shouldn't have said that.

"Thanks. I try."

Just go with it.

We head inside. This library is pretty big. Old too. It has two floors. My favorite is the second floor. That's where all the books about fantasy or the occult are. I'm a spooky bitch at heart, what can I say.

You whistle.


"Place is huge!"

"Shh!"

We see a staff member at the front desk, she obnoxiously points to the sign reading "QUIET IN THE LIBRARY"

"My bad. 😬"

I tug at your sleeve.

"I'll take you to my favorite section. It's on the second floor"

When we get to the floor, there's not many people. It's like 3, including the librarian that comes up on occasion. The ones that are here are scattered around and pretty far apart.

"Slow day, huh?"

"Not surprising since it's a Sunday. I like it this way. More peaceful."

"I know what I already want. It's definitely here."

"Great 😃"

I'm happily perusing the aisle for books to take home. You're not too far from me as you skim the rows of books.

I glance at you a couple times and I could swear you're looking at my chest. I think? If you're aware of my not wearing a bra, you're not saying anything about it.

"I'm gonna take a look at another section, if that's okay?"

"Of course"

I eventually find a book that interests me. I read for a few minutes. At some point you come back.

"Hey, kiddo. I have something to show you in another section you really need to see!"

You take me by the hand and lead me to an aisle on the other side of the 2nd floor.

It's definitely an older, more isolated section of the stacks. The light here flickers, but it's off more than on. Probably from the old, crappy wiring. I don't know how you can even see the book titles.

"What did you want to show me?"

You point to a book on a shelf just a above my reach. I stand on my tippy toes to grab it. I think it's the one you pointed to but it's dark.

"Almost Got it -"

I you're so close behind me, your breath is against my ear.

"You have no Idea how sexy you are, do you? Here's a secret, I Stroke my cock to the thought of you almost every night."

Before I can process what you said, I see you're towering over me, pinning me to the shelves from behind.

"And I know you cum thinking of me often."

Your hands slide under my sweater, feeling up my waist, my curves, my tummy. One hand cups my breasts. Your other arm snakes around my torso. Your hands are so big and warm.

"You can't dress like that and not expect me to use you, Leah"

Your face nuzzles against my neck. You breath in the scent of my shampoo and body lotion. My body trembles and stiffens.

This can't be for real.

"Y- you're playing a prank on me aren't you?"

"What do you think?"

You take a sharp nibble on my earlobe and I let out a tiny squeak of shock, pain and pleasure.


You deeply sigh in satisfaction and lust. Your hand goes back and forth between each breast kneading and fondling them. Your fingers play with or pinches my nipples as you kiss up and down along my neck.

"You know mmm...ah.. I like you?? Ahn...How- When- ?"

"Had a chat with your housemate a few weeks ago. You were in the bathroom. Her name was...Donna? She spilled the beans by accident."

Fucking Donna.

You pinch my nipple, I let out another soft squeak.

"Then, you invite me to come here today, dressed like this, tits out. Practically begging me to feel them and you up."

"Max ahhnn..We shouldn't be...ah... It's.. not..."

Abruptly, you stop toying with my nipples to cover my mouth. The arm around my torso keeps me tight against you.

"Shh. You have to be quiet in a library."

I feel how hard and engorged you're getting against my ass. Your touch, your voice, your words make me surrender easily.

I know it's not exactly kosher to let someone who's not my boyfriend touch me like this, especially in public. Right now though, I don't really give a shit. I want you, need you so bad.

"You're such a pervert, letting me touch you like this. You love this don't you?"

Your arm around my torso loosens, then your hand travels down, past my tummy, my navel, then under my skirt, then snake your way into my panties.

Your fingers glide and dance along the lips of my pussy. You caress my labia and glide further inside. God I didn't realize how wet I really was until I could feel the cool air.

"You're so soft. So wet."

My body to melts into yours, to better allow you to do as you will.

"You're soaking wet for me already? Such a slut, aren't you?"

I move my head in a way that frees my mouth.

"I'm a slut for you Max. I've always been a slut for you."

"My perfect little slut"

"Yours"

You deeply, softly growl in satisfaction. You pull my face backwards and kiss me hard and deeply, our tongues dancing with and into each other.

The hand you had on my mouth before, is now firmly grasped around my neck to keep me close to you. I raise my arms to prop myself against the shelf to keep my balance.

You pull out of the kiss to pull my panties down with your other hand.

After, I feel and hear you slightly struggle to unbuckle your belt, unbutton your jeans and unzip your zipper one handed.

I feel the air against my skin as the jeans slide down and the vibration of the thud of the fabric as it hits the floor.


"Squeeze your legs together for me baby. Yeah, just like that."

You thrust your cock in between my thighs. Your cock rubs hard against the length of my pussy using my wetness as lubricant. You pump in and out, hard and fast between my thighs.

"Ffffuck Leah, your thighs are so soft."

The exhilaration of doing something so naughty, and pleasure rising from the stimulation from everything that you're doing to me. It makes my insides tighten and tingle and needy for release.

"You enjoy me using you to stroke my cock baby?"

"I do. I fucking love it"

As your pace slows, you grip my ass cheek hard, and give it a little jiggle. You pull your cock from between my legs. I let out a soft disappointed whine.

Excuse me, but I wasn't done! 🙎‍♀️.


"Hehe you're so cute pouting like that. Don't worry, we're not finished yet."

Good, I need more 🤤

"You ever been fucked before Leah?"

"Um...once... before I moved here for college. It wasn't anything like this."

"I figured. You're so sensitive."

"Is... Is that a deal breaker.?"

"I think, you should open your legs for me."


I obey.

You stroke your cock. You pull me close for another kiss, You rub your tip against my hot, needy entrance then slowly enter me. Stretching my pussy open for you bit by bit. :hot: :lipbite:

"Grrrmm You're so..fucking tight baby."

I feel euphoric as your cock thrusts deep and slow and steady into me. As if you are languishing and savoring every centimeter you claim. You're so hard, so big. I'm so full. I'm in bliss.

"Ahn....so hard..so... fucking good...I love ahn..your cock"

"I'm gonna fucking....ruin you...Over and over....rrrrmmm I'll Never...get...enough."

"I want you too ruin me. I don't want any other cock inside my pussy"

"You're mine. All mine."

"All yours"

You hunch over me and penetrate me even deeper than before. I'm trying so hard not to moan as you take me furiously. Rutting into me like you're an animal and I'm your prey.

"You look..mmmnnng so... fucking hot taking my cock Leah."

"I want all of it. I want all of you inside me!"

You thrust harder and faster.

I hear something. Oh fuck, is that someone nearby?!

"I need to cum baby. There's no time to do it outside without getting caught."

I'm all desire and need right now. I am getting so hot at the thought of you pumping your cum into me. I want all of you to be mine, including your cum. I need all of you inside.

"Fill me...aah...please! Nng Please ah fill me!"

You squeeze me so tight and bite into the nape of my neck hard as you rut into me, your cock swells, then shoots and coats my tender insides with your hot white cum. You try to catch your breath as you shrink and slide out of me.

My hair is messy, my face flushed. Eyes glassy but happy as I feel your cum making it's way out of my pussy. I feel like my head is a cloud. You kiss me again.

"You look so beautiful right now, baby."

"I wish I knew you felt this way sooner."

"I wanted to take you since the moment I saw you under that light."

"Then why-"

We hear the footsteps getting closer.
You pull my underwear back up to hopefully keep the rest of your cum sliding down my legs.

I put myself back together. You get your pants back superhumanly fast.

The librarian passes right by. All she sees is just you and me standing shoulder to shoulder, looking at a passage in a book at the farther end of the stack.

She's none the wiser that it's actually upside down. She walks away, hopefully not seeing the small stream of cum leaking down my leg.


Whew.

When the coast is clear, both look at each other and we smile like partners in crime and chuckle under our breath.

"Thank God, that was close."

"Speaking of close"

You deftly place your hand on the center of my chest. You gently push and guide my back into the shelf behind me. You prop your arm above my head against the wall of books and tower over me yet again.

You sweetly touch my face and tilt my chin so I can look into your beautiful eyes. I drop the book in my hands.

Despite everything that just happened, I still feel like my face is turning beet red from the sound of your voice and the intimate intensity and affection in your gaze.😳🫣🤤

"Did you enjoy it?"

"Very much."

"Do you wanna be mine, Leah?"

I take your hand under my chin and move it to my cheek. I kiss your palm, then your wrist. I relish the soft scent of salt and tobacco mixed with the fading musk of cologne. I bask in the feeling of your pulse and skin against mine.

You're so beautiful.


" I was always yours. Do you want to be mine, Max?"

He kisses me again, deeply and sweetly hugging me tight.

"All yours, Leah."

I think we are gonna visit the library quite a bit in the near future. There's a lot of aisles after all.

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Last edited by VeraSmithy on Mon Jan 19, 2026 9:52 pm, edited 38 times in total.
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Haven't had a chance to read Home yet, but if it's written anything like this I'm looking forward to doing so.

I love how you've made the reader a character in the story. This isn't an easy feat to pull off and you've done it marvelously. There's a couple of places where it's written as "he" instead of "you," but it's a minor thing that can be easily edited.
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A nice story. I really like the first person narration adressing another person as you. I wrote a story like that myself. It's fun to write, right? I also recognize some similarities to home, like both girls being into gaming for example.

The story could do with a little bit of proof reading though and I think you mixed up the colors close to the end. A lot of the narration is in blue and I think this line here:
VeraSmithy wrote: Sat Jan 17, 2026 8:41 pm "That was so good baby. Your thighs are like a fleshlight."
Should be blue but is red in the text.

Also, @VeraSmithy, I would love to see you comment on other authors' stories as well. We currently have a contest going on, it's all flash fiction, so a story can be read in less than 5 minutes. Help us decide who advances to the next round. ;)
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I like consensual stories too so let's see if my fuzzy brain can give any useful feedback today.

tabe -> table? Sounds like a fun bar.

I know the feeling about bars being way too busy, and books are wonderful to escape into :)

Totally get that drained social battery and sensory overload. Frustrating when that gets in the way.

I find this first person second person thing interesting even if it is in main character's head, though I prefer present tense for making it more vivid and in the moment :)

Leah has a lot of self image issues, clearly if Max is hanging out with you he actually cares about you, though that does not always have to be sexual interest, but it often can be. Could also be desire to protect.

Oh we will have flying cars any year now :) I am sure...

As for coloured text, that can be a bit problematic if the forum ever exposes multiple themes, and certain colours may be less readable for certain people. Though I also like the idea of it on some level, it is more concise than "Hey kiddo!" you said, "Thanks for coming with me..." I said

Fantasy lover too nice :)

Hmm interesting to use smileys to indicate mood in a story that is new to me, but I am ancient, I use smileys when I chat and in forum posts, but have not seen them used in stories yet, and let me make it clear they are not bad, just different and new to me in this medium :)

I do find them cute together so far :)

Interesting switch from you to he after "You point to a book..."

Him expressing sexual desire and touching her when that is what she probably has dreamed of for a while now is probably huge validation of self worth, given her poor self image.

Silly question, you spend a lot of time with him, talk openly about a lot of things, so there is some level of liking there. Oh and Donna spilling the beans lol, gotcha.

Should thank fucking Donna later :)

Another slip into he from you, not a big issue but if you care you can search for occurrences to edit :)

Doyou may need a space :)

Hot story, keep writing more and keep em coming :)
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Well done and sexy, the chosen formatting and smileys work out fine. The horny couple is written very well, I wouldn't say no to seeing more of them.

There are certain proofreading issues, but not nearly enough to detract from the story's quality.
VeraSmithy wrote: Sat Jan 17, 2026 8:41 pmYou slow yourself and grip my ass cheek hard. You pull your cock from between my legs. I wasn't Done 🙎‍♀️. He
Something's missing here, even if's just an em-dash.

Is spelling and formatting 'fuckingtight' this way a conscious choice? :)
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Lucius wrote: Sun Jan 18, 2026 3:01 pm Well done and sexy, the chosen formatting and smileys work out fine. The horny couple is written very well, I wouldn't say no to seeing more of them.

There are certain proofreading issues, but not nearly enough to detract from the story's quality.
VeraSmithy wrote: Sat Jan 17, 2026 8:41 pmYou slow yourself and grip my ass cheek hard. You pull your cock from between my legs. I wasn't Done 🙎‍♀️. He
Something's missing here, even if's just an em-dash.

Is spelling and formatting 'fuckingtight' this way a conscious choice? :)

Hi Lucius, thank you very much for the feedback! I'm so happy you enjoyed the story. If inspiration strikes, more Max and Leah tales could happen. I'm even open to requests.

I've made some adjustments to the spots I missed that you kindly brought to my attention. I even added some new stuff here and there.
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Vela Nanashi wrote: Sun Jan 18, 2026 5:19 am I like consensual stories too so let's see if my fuzzy brain can give any useful feedback today.

tabe -> table? Sounds like a fun bar.

I know the feeling about bars being way too busy, and books are wonderful to escape into :)

Totally get that drained social battery and sensory overload. Frustrating when that gets in the way.

I find this first person second person thing interesting even if it is in main character's head, though I prefer present tense for making it more vivid and in the moment :)

Leah has a lot of self image issues, clearly if Max is hanging out with you he actually cares about you, though that does not always have to be sexual interest, but it often can be. Could also be desire to protect.

Oh we will have flying cars any year now :) I am sure...

As for coloured text, that can be a bit problematic if the forum ever exposes multiple themes, and certain colours may be less readable for certain people. Though I also like the idea of it on some level, it is more concise than "Hey kiddo!" you said, "Thanks for coming with me..." I said

Fantasy lover too nice :)

Hmm interesting to use smileys to indicate mood in a story that is new to me, but I am ancient, I use smileys when I chat and in forum posts, but have not seen them used in stories yet, and let me make it clear they are not bad, just different and new to me in this medium :)

I do find them cute together so far :)

Interesting switch from you to he after "You point to a book..."

Him expressing sexual desire and touching her when that is what she probably has dreamed of for a while now is probably huge validation of self worth, given her poor self image.

Silly question, you spend a lot of time with him, talk openly about a lot of things, so there is some level of liking there. Oh and Donna spilling the beans lol, gotcha.

Should thank fucking Donna later :)

Another slip into he from you, not a big issue but if you care you can search for occurrences to edit :)

Doyou may need a space :)

Hot story, keep writing more and keep em coming :)

Hi Vela! I'm so happy you enjoyed the story ☺️. And thank you for the feedback. I'm glad you brought the slips to my attention. I think I got all of em now.

I'm glad you didn't find the use of emojis a detriment to the story. It was a little bit of me experimenting to see if it would make things just a tiny bit more immersive or at least give the characters a bit more personality pop in the dialogue either internal or external.

I definitely get what you mean with the colors. They were originally a standard red and blue, but they were definitely tough on my eyes so I am hoping this choice of a softer shade of brighter green and turquoise blue is better. It's certainly easier on my eyes 😅.
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