Meteor Storm

[MadChris]

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Helena walked by the side of her new boyfriend Andy holding his hand as they strolled over the well maintained lawn of the university campus heading to the large library.
Helena remembered her first day as she stood in front of the class , being introduced by the tutor to her new classmates , a mixture of boy's and girl's , that was nearly 5 week's ago ..

" I would like you all to welcome Helena , she is a exchange student from the Algarve , for those of you uncertain about where the Algarve is , it is in Portugal " .
" They all said welcome Helena ".
Helena nodded , Thank you ".
She could see the boy's looking up and down her body .

Helena was 5' 7" , she had long fair brown hair that rested on top of her 34 b cup breasts
She had hazel coloured eye's , a cute nose , cupid shaped luscious lips , and a sparkling bright white smile , she had a slim waist , long shapely leg's .
She could almost feel the boy's eye's undressing her , except one , he was staring at her face , he gave her a beaming smile , then spoke to her .
" Welcome to England and the university , I'm sure you will enjoy your stay , my name is Andrew , but generally known as Andy ".

Helena smiled back at him ...
He had fair hair , blue eye's , a lovely bright smile , from what she could see , he was muscular , and had broad wide shoulder's , but it was his eye's , deep blue and sparkling that held her captivated .
They had become close friend's , studying together daily , going to the cinema in the city of Manchester , he'd taken her to the Manchester Arena to see a Scorpions concert , she had been to the Hard Rock cafe , he taken her for the traditional Fish and Chips and mushy pea's , the pea's weren't to her taste but she ate what she could being polite

A few of her male classmates , had asked her out for dates , but Andy always seemed to intervene ..
" Sorry guy's we have got other plans " .
And so it happened , it was coming up to the Summer Ball which always took place on the second weekend of June .

They were sitting opposite each other in the library .
She could see him looking at her and smiled .
" I was wondering if you'd like to be my partner for the dance on Saturday if you have nothing planned or at least think about it ..

Helena looked up at him , yes let me think about it , she gave him a smile , well I've thought about it and I'd love to go with you ".
Helena and Andy we're inseparable after the dance , and they were classed as a couple it stopped the boy's from pestering her ,and she was happy. .

Helena and Andy had almost got to the large fountain , the water spout almost reaching 15' . something from out of the sky hit it , it shook them wavered then toppled over .

Helena stopped and looked up to the bright red and blue sky .
" What's that ?
Andy looked up , bright orange and red ball's of fire were falling from the sky then exploding on impact as they crashed on the tops of buildings demolishing them , parked car's were thrown upwards and crashing back down , they began hearing people screaming , heard calls for help , heard the sound of emergency service sirens .

Andy looked into Helena's terrified eye's , then put his arm's around her , not sure but we need to get under cover and quick .
"Quick let's go to the library , we should be safe in there , it's been standing for about 200 year's ..

They heard a screaming coming from behind them , they both turned , and watched in horror as a fireball hit a group of 7 or 8 student's , they saw two girls running around and screaming hysterically , their hair and clothes on fire , Helena buried her face against Andy's chest , the palms of her hand's covering her ear's ..
She felt Andy pulling her .

" We've got to get inside , find safety " .
Helena sobbed , " I'm sure that was Kate and Alice ".
" I don't know , but it's all over for them , and we could be next if we don't find any cover soon "
A few minutes later they were in the library , groups of students hiding under large oak table's , screaming in panic , sobbing uncontrollably , hysteria filled the great room .

Suddenly the library shook , books fell from the bookshelves ,marble head and shoulder busts of famous people dropped from the high shelving , they heard an ear piercing scream .

Andy turned , one of the busts had fallen on the leg's of a student , he saw a stream of blood forming a pool around the shattered limb .
The table behind had been crushed flat by a large slab of concrete , if anyone has been hiding under it no one would have survived .
Then suddenly the lights began to flicker on and off , the library shook again , sending more of the ceiling falling downwards crushing tables and chairs , oil paintings fell from the wall's , suddenly a large chandelier crashed to the floor sending shards of crystals all across the room , more screams followed ..

Helena was stood frozen to the spot , Andy grabbed her , he ran to a door that he knew led down into a basement , the basement was used for storage , books ,tables ,chairs desks , oak shelving , carpets , bookshelves , in fact anything that wasn't needed upstairs ....
They sat holding each other close , the library shook a couple of times , dust fell from the ceiling of the basement , each time Helena screamed , " we're going to be buried alive aren't we ".
" No we are safe here , we are under solid reinforced concrete and there is even another lower level ..
They sat cuddled together for what seemed hour's , the library had stopped shaking , they could still hear loud noises coming from the room above ...
Helena had her head resting against Andy's chest , she was sobbing , he could feel her whole body shaking , he lifted her head up to face him then looked into her eye's.

"We're going to be ok , it seems whatever it was had passed by , I'm going to take a look upstairs , I won't be long and will stay in ear distance ,
Helena begged Andy .
" Please please don't leave me , I'd rather come with you , he stared at her and knew there was no point of arguing , he'd seen that look on her face before ..
He stood up then took hold of Helena's hand and helped her to her feet .
Andy had to remove some rubble that blocked the way up the steps , they moved slowly , then stepped in to the main part of the library , most of the roof had collapsed , they stared at the reddish sky above them , but at least it seemed as if the fireballs had stopped falling ..

They cautiously walked around the library , being careful not to disturb anything ..
Helena looked around , she was sobbing silently to herself , she couldn't believe the devastation , not a single table , chair ,or bookshelf remained in tact .

She heard Andy calling to her , she turned , he was holding up a back pack , and a bottle of water .
She moved towards until she was beside him .
" Here take a drink ".
Helena took a large mouthful , then spat it out getting rid of the dryness in her mouth , Andy did the same , then he handed her a opened packet of crisps . it's not much , but it will have to do
Helena put a hand over Andy's mouth .
She leaned close to him and whispered I heard something coming from behind you ".

Andy turned slowly , then heard the moaning .

They walked towards the sound .
A girl lay trapped , a large slab of concrete lay over both her leg's , she was bleeding from her chest and had a large open gash on one side of her head head , her hair was matted with sticky blood , she was barely conscious , her eye's fluttered , her moans getting even lower .

Andy ripped off his shirt , then soaked his shirt , he wiped the blood from her face , then handed his shirt to Helena ,
" Clean her leg's and arm's .
Lifting the bottle of water he held it to the girl's lips ..
She began coughing , he looked down , it didn't look good when he saw traces of blood , but after a few more sips the water dripping out of her mouth was clear. .. but when he moved his hand from behind her head it was covered with sticky blood ...
He motioned to Helena and shook his head , Helena silently sobbed , they stayed with the girl until she finally succumbed to her injuries .
Helena closed the girl's eye's , she covered the girl's face with Andy's T shirt , then laid the girl's arms across her chest , then said a prayer for her ..
Andy took hold of Helena's hand and walked towards the main door of the library , then stepped out , they could see the ball's of fire still plummeting to the earth ..
" We need to get away from the city , I think we should head north to the lake district , I think it will be a lot safer , what do you think .?

They looked around for some supplies , but only found a bit of food in some of the many back packs that lay strewn over the once immaculate lawns , and a few bottles of water .
Helena suggested they tried to find some transport , they looked at the car's on the car park .
After trying a few car's Andy shook his head , all the electrics were burnt out .
It's no good , looks like we have a long walk ahead of us , but first we should go to find good and supplies .

They moved cautiously through the streets of the city , it was total devastation , hardly a building was standing , the shops they went inside had been looted , cash registers were open , the cash was still inside .
The further they went into the city the worse thing's got rival gangs were fighting each other , sounds of gunshots could be heard , screams filled the city , people begging for help , young women were screaming a gangs of youths approached them ..
" Come on I think I know a place where we might find help ".
They made their way through the city , and eventually came to a farm a few miles away .
Andy walked up to the farmhouse and knocked on the door .

" Mr Simpson it Andy Walker , I used to help you on the farm with my Dad ".
The door opened , Mr Simpson stood there , a shotgun in his hand.

" Please we need help , I don't suppose you still have that old Morris traveller van or the old Anglia do you ".
Mr Simpson smiled .
" I remember you now , your Father was one of the policemen wasn't he " ?
"Yeah that's right ".
He looked at Helena .
" Is she your wife " .
" Uh no she's my girlfriend , we were thinking of heading up to the lake district and could make use of some transport , all the car's or vans in the city are modern cars and all the electrics are burnt out , but I've got a feeling that the cold cars might still be working , you could come with us if you want to ?
" Yeah the car's are in that barn , not sure if they are running , if they are you are welcome to them , but I can't come with you , do you remember Suzi my daughter ..

" Oh yes , we were in the same class in junior school , ".
" Well she's inside , she bedridden , had a fall from her pony and broke her back " .

"Oh God I'm sorry , we thought she was going to that ladies finishing school in London ...

Helena kept Suzi company while Mr Simpson took Andy to the barn , they returned back hour's later .
Mr Simpson smiled . They knew how to make cars in them day's didn't they ...
" They sure did Mr Simpson , are you sure you won't come with us , we can work something out . ".
Mr Simpson wouldn't change his mind , he gave them a few supplies , then watched as the Morris traveller disappeared into the distance .

Helena and Andy drove for day's , until suddenly the engine cut out ..

" Damn , looks like we're walking from now on ".
The supplies were running out , and the water had almost gone.

It was getting late , they were both exhausted , so they decided to sleep and get a fresh early start in the morning ..

They'd walked for hour's and found no good or water , then Helena pointed to some smoked coming up through some tree's .
They found a cabin , and slowly approached it , Helena stood close behind Andy.
A man suddenly appeared on the porch holding a rifle ..

" Stay right there , I will protect myself , what do you want ".
" Please Andy said , we are unarmed , we don't want to cause a problem , we have no food or water , we saw the smoke coming from your chimney , and wondered if maybe we could get some help ?
" I've got water and food , what have you got to trade , time's are hard ".
Helena stepped forwards ..
" Mister we don't have anything , we haven't eaten in day's and our water is nearly gone
please can you spare anything ,anything at all ".

" It's just the two of you ,?
" Yes just me and Andy ".

" Ok , but no funny business ,or I will shoot ".

Helena and Andy were inside , they were sat down opposite the man sat in an armchair
" I knew this was going to happen one day , I kept telling them , with all the garbage they'd left in space something had to give .
I worked at NASA , but they said I was mad , and now it's happening and it will get worse , so I left , found this place and worked in survival ..
He stood up and told them to follow him , he led them down to a basement , they both stared in amazement at all the supplies he had stored , not just food , he also had an underground well .

" Fresh water , from the spring below. ".
He had generators and drums of fuel , tins upon tins of canned food , boxes of military rations , the stores were endless ..
" Got enough here to last for years , the military rations are from 1940 and still good to eat , smoked cheese , spam, formed beef , tins and tins of soups , potatoes ,carrots ,peas , tins of rice , I've even got old chocolate bars you've never heard of , and boiled sweets ".

" Sir please please could you just let us have a few bottles of water , and a little food , that's all we ask " .

He led them back upstairs carrying a couple of ration packs , and 6 bottles of water ..

" Thank you ,oh God thank you. ".

Andy reached inside one of the ration packs , he pulled out a ton of peaches .

" Baby look , peaches " .
He looked at the man who had introduced himself as Jake ..
" Do you have a spare tin opener we can use ?

Jake smiled .
" Yeah but like I said you need something to trade ".

Helena looked at him .
" Please you know we have nothing nothing at all , but if we find anything out there , we'll be back we promise " ..

Andy didn't like the way he was looking at Helena , something just didn't seem right .

" Well young lady , I haven't had me a woman in months , been kind of lonely , so how about you let me slip my cock in your pussy , then I'll give you a tin opener and more supplies as well ".
Andy looked at him .
" Your crazy , no way , you fucking pervert " .
Jake pointed the rifle at him ,
" Just stay right there , no trade no supplies it's as simple as that , just a little bit of female company ".
Andy took hold of Helena's hand .
" Come on we're going , ".
Jake moved out of the way .
" Ok there's the door , Good luck "..
Two day's later ,and they were out of water , they'd managed to find some berries and some corn on the cob , but that was all ..
Helena turned to Andy , "We need to go back , if we don't we will starve , I love you , but we have to survive , hopefully with supplies we might find something ".
They returned to the cabin , the door was open , the rations and water were still in the same place ..
" I don't think he's here , we can take the stuff , we'll find someway of opening the tins .

Then Helena pointed to a red dot that appeared on the front of Andy's T shirt
Jake was stood in the basement doorway , his eye's looking down the sights of the rifle

" I could shoot you right now in the eye's of the law ,if there is any law out there now ".

Helena stood in front of Andy .
" I'm ready to do what you want , but you give Andy the tin opener and the rations , then you let him leave to hide the supplies , when he comes back , he waits outside , then we'll go , is that a deal ?
Jake nodded , but I want him inside , I don't want him doing anything stupid ...

Andy left with the supplies , a hour later he returned .

" Ok boy you sit in that armchair ".
He pointed at Helena .
" Now you tie him up , nice and tight , you can use that "
Helena picked up a roll of duct tape that was laying on the table .

" I want wrists on the arms of the chair and you keep wrapping him up until the tape is up to his elbows , then his ankles , to the legs up to his knee's ".
Jake stopped in front of Andy and checked the restraints .

" Very good , you've done a good job baby girl ".
" Please can't you move him into another room at least , I don't want him watching . ".
" No he stays right where he is so I can kept my eyes on him ".
" Can I at least then him away ?
" Yeah ok , ".
She turned Andy so he was facing away , then whispered in his ear .
" I can do this , it will soon be over and we can get away from here ok " .

Helena stood in front of Jake , he was looking up and down her body , with a huge smile on his face ..

" Ok baby time to show me what you've got to trade ".

Helena reached down , opened her cut off shorts and let them drop to her ankles , her pussy was now on show .
" And the top baby I want you naked ".
Andy heard Jake gasp .
" Oh God baby , you really are something special " ..
Helena cringed when Jake caressed her breasts and start stroking her nipples ..
" So nice and firm baby , I bet Andy loves sucking on these "..
Jake ran his hand's up and down her body , commenting on how wonderful she felt , and how long it had been since he'd touched a woman ...
Jake pulled a handkerchief out of his jeans ,
" Wipe it for me , get it nice and clean ".

Helena rubbed the handkerchief up and down her pussy lips then let it fall to the floor ...

Jake took hold of her hand and rubbed it up and down his cock .
Helena felt it growing in her hand , it felt huge , she had never touched a cock in her life , she had however felt Andy's cock pressing against her when they cuddled together to get warm .
" Come on baby , get it out and show me what you can do " .
Helena opened his jeans , then took hold of his cock , she could barely wrap her hand around the thick cock shaft ...
Jake pushed her down to her knee's. , his cock was inches from her face , she could smell it ,and the smell wanted her to throw up. ..

" Come on baby you know what to do , and don't you dare make me cum , I want it nice and slow understand *.
" Sir , I've never done this before , not anything "..
" Hey Andy , are you a fucking queer , you've never fucked her " ?
Andy didn't say anything , he wouldn't give the bastard the pleasure ..
" Ok baby , guess I'll have to help you , open wide for me , nice and wide , and keep looking at me I want to see the look of pleasure on your beautiful face "..

Helena gagged as soon as his cock entered her mouth .
" Oh baby your gagging now , just wait until it's down your throat then you'll really be gagging ".
Helena felt his cock going deeper inch by inch , he was telling her to cup his ball's , and lick and suck around his throbbing cock ..

Andy could hear the sucking and slurping , could hear Helena coughing and spluttering
" That's good baby your doing fucking great , judge keep doing what your doing . ..

Helena felt she must have been sucking and licking for hour's , everytime she thought he was going to cum he pulled away , then started again , she felt him throbbing and heard him moaning , his eye's were looking down into her's .

" Ok baby time to change things. , sit in that chair and spread your leg's , time for me to taste some fresh young pussy. " .
Andy suddenly lost it , he pulled at the restraints , " You fucking bastard , I'll fucking kill you ".

Jake walked towards Andy slapped him hard across the face ,then turned him to face Helena ,
" And now you can watch the whole show as I fuck every one of her holes and fill them with cum " .
He walked straight over to Helena and stupidity his clothes , he knelt in between her leg's , out his hand's on her knee's and spread her wider .

" Mmmmmm, I can smell sweet fresh pussy , I'm going to enjoy this ".

Helena froze as she felt him touch her pussy , in fact the first time anybody had touched , her pussy , only she had touched herself when she needed the urge to get rid of her pent up l lust ..squirmed as she felt his tongue working up and down her slit , then moaned as his tongue licked around her tiny clit , she gripped the arms of the chair until her knuckles turned white ..

" Can you hear her moaning boy , soon I'll have her screaming out in pleasure , she'll be begging her to fuck by the time I finished with her , you don't know what you've been missing she tastes so fucking sweet .

He worked on her until he felt her juices started to flow , then slowly inserted a finger , then another until his finger's were slick , he heard her groan , felt her go tense. he waited until she almost climaxed then pulled away.

" Not yet baby not yet ".
He walked over to Andy , grabbed his hair and twisted it , then forced him to look up at him ".
" Taste her " .
He ran his finger's over Andy's lips .
"Bastard you fucking bastard I'll make you pay for this ".

Jake just laughed and walked away ..
" Ok baby , let's liven the party up a bit ".

He pulled Helena off the chair and dragged her over a few feet in front of Andy .
" Ok baby time for you to practice your sucking skills , now tell Andy to watch you , tell him how much you love my cock , and you wish it could have been him to be your first "

Helena shook her head side to side .

" Please please don't make me do this , just fuck me and let us go please I'm begging you ".
" You do what I say , or Andy will wish he hadn't been born " .

He walked to Andy and punched him hard in the stomach .
Andy doubled over , he coughed and spluttered try to get back his breath .

" You going to do what I say ".
Helena nodded ..

" Andy please ,please watch me suck Jake's cock , I love it , I really do. ".
Helena crawled over to Jake , sat upright on her ankles ,then reached out to take hold of Jake's throbbing cock ..
Jake slapped her hands away .
" Just your sweet mouth baby , and make me feel real good " .
Helena moved in closer , then licked the tip, it was leaking pre cum , she looked up Jake

"Lick it clean baby , get used to the taste ".
Jake looked at Andy .
" If I catch you not looking , sweetie here will suffer I promise you ".
Helena took him in her mouth , licking and sucking around his shaft .
" That's good baby , take it deeper , , ".
Helena gagged when it touched the entry to her throat .
" Good so good , now reach down and finger yourself get yourself nice and wet " .

Helena began moaning and groaning as she inserted two finger's in her pussy , her thumb stroking gently on her clit ..
Jake placebos hands on the back of her head and thrust hard , his cock opened up Helena's throat , she tried backing away but Jake held her tight ...
He looked at Andy , Andy's eye's were wide open , he couldn't believe the bastard had her face pressed into his pubic hair , he watched as Helena tried pushing away , but Jake kept thrusting deeper ..
Jake suddenly moaned , his body went rigid , his ball's tightened , Helena was struggling to push him away ..
Then Jake screamed out in pleasure , his cum shot deep down inside Helena's throat , once , twice , then he pulled out , and his third load spewed all over Helena's face and hair , he then pushed her away .

Helena was on her hand's and knee's , she was sobbing uncontrollably , vomit shot out of her mouth , she then collapsed on the floor doubled up , her throat and jaw were aching , her top lip was split and she tasted her blood ..

[AdmiralPiet]

I did read this because the title sounded interesting.

Since there is no introduction, chapter title or end note I am a little confused. I guess this is the first of several chapters?
I would suggest using the pre-made post model for stories.


The story didn't catch me, and I might not read furter chapters. But I want to offer some constructive critique.
I think you could work on your sentence structure. The text was odd to read at times.

I myself learned the hard way that the english language is not well suited for long sentences, and works better with adding a full-stop more often

Helena remembered her first day as she stood in front of the class , being introduced by the tutor to her new classmates , a mixture of boy's and girl's , that was nearly 5 week's ago ..

They had become close friend's , studying together daily , going to the cinema in the city of Manchester , he'd taken her to the Manchester Arena to see a Scorpions concert , she had been to the Hard Rock cafe , he taken her for the traditional Fish and Chips and mushy pea's , the pea's weren't to her taste but she she what she could being polite

Two examples. Both sentences would already be improved by adding just one full stop before the last part of the sentence. (after "...girls" and "...peas")
The second in particular should be chopped up further.
Also check your use of the plural "s".
Girls, not girl's.

Helena was 5' 7" , she had long fair brown hair that rested on top of her 34 b cup breasts
She had hazel coloured eye's , a cute nose , cupid shaped luscious lips , and a sparkling bright white smile , she had a slim waist , long shapely leg's .

Instead of infodumping all this in one go, maybe search for ways to implement it more naturaly into the text.

Helena looked up at him , yes let me think about it , she gave him a smile , well I've thought about it and I'd love to go with you ".

This sentence is very hard to read. You have two instances of direct speech that should not be part of one sentence separated by commas. The lone quotation marks serve no purpose.

Maybe try to go with something like this:
Helena looked up at him and replied: "Yes let me think about it."
"Well I've thought about it and I'd love to go with you" she said a mere second later.

[Vile8r]

I don't know where this story is going to end up going, but so far, I enjoy the premise of it, anyway. Two young lovers caught in the middle of a catastrophic event!

I do agree with @AdmiralPiet, it has some grammatical shortcomings that need to be worked on, but hey, I like Andy already! He's a Scorpions fan! Can't be ALL bad!