Tom's Wet Encounter - March/April Contest

[Vela Nanashi]

Teaser: Her lips push my foreskin back and I nearly cum again as her lips slip down my cock head and then her hot tongue licks me and I feel my legs shaking and my cock jumps erupting in her and I cry out holding her head in my hands a bit forcefully as I feel my hips thrusting and I see cum erupt out of her nose under the water, yet she simply rests her hands on my thighs massaging them as I fuck her lips and mouth and tongue and throat, her pupils going agape and she moans into me.

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Title: Tom's Wet Encounter

By: Vela Nanashi

My stories: Vela Nanashi, seeping through the cracks

This story competes in the March/April Community Contest

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Tom:

I listen to the pendulum and the ticking of the clock on my right and the rain hitting the balcony window door, then a blinding white flash illuminates my room. I look down at the sketch I am drawing, the gorgeous woman from my dreams, dancing naked in the rain, two large swords in her hands, beautiful swords, but not as beautiful as she is, her golden hair slicked against her body. I am frustrated I can't capture her better in the sketch. I put my pencil down and shrug out of my comfortable robe, I want to be inspired by feeling what she must have felt dancing naked in the rain like that.

The thunder clap shakes the windows in my house, this storm is a powerful one, but I am not scared, I shake my feet out of my comfortable bunny slippers, and now naked I go to my balcony door and open it, stepping out on my large balcony, overlooking my garden, I get briefly shocked at how cool the rain is but I stretch my arms out and look up at the storm clouds, I spread my legs a bit to let my cock and balls feel the flow of the rain around them, I shiver but still enjoy the rain and I close my eyes. The bell of my clock tolls and I hear another crack of lighting, I bring to my mind that beautiful woman and as I do, naked like I am I feel my cock pulse awakening from its sleep, I laugh a bit and knowing nobody is here to see me I shake my cock a bit and get it spinning in the rain, I imagine how it might feel to job up to her, grab her, but no I don't want to force myself on her, not really, she laughs and presses herself up against me.

Suddenly the smooth stone below my feet turns into smooth round stones that I sink into and the scent changes a lot from where I was, but it is still raining, but it is warmer rain. I open my eyes and before me I see her, my cock goes all the rest of the way to rock hard as her scent reaches me. Then with one fluid and graceful motion she dances toward me faster than I can react and her right sword comes to a rest at my neck, I can feel how incredibly sharp it is, but she also does not cut me, just a few hairs on my neck.

I meet her gaze and she says something with that beautiful musical voice of hers, there is a seriousness to her tone though, I shift my upturned arms to make my palms face her in a surrender, my cock chooses this time to pulse and bounce and it draws her attention slightly I speak up though "I promise I mean you no harm, even if I look like some deranged flashing or peeping Tom, my name is Tom, but I don't mean to peep, or flash you, I... I don't even know how I got here."

Her blue, green, violet eyes shimmer with light and I feel a warmth in my mind and she speaks still in her musical language, but I also understand her "a human, the first one I have seen on this world, where do you come from, I know it is not this world, your dimensional signature is wrong" her eyes look me over and she pulls her sword away "you are no danger to me, no magic, and you could not overcome me if you tried" she says with some obvious pride, and it is true that her muscles are way stronger than mine, sure I know how to use a rapier, but I don't have one, and she uses two big long swords, and when she moves with them her muscles are visible, but now as she takes a more restful stance they are not obvious. "I am Cara, pleased to meet you Tom" she says smiling "I do not mind you are naked and excited to see me, in fact I like that, do you desire me sexually?"

She returns to her dance, staying just out of range to cut me with her swords, and I am not sure but I think she is putting on more of a show of her body than before.

I let my arms drop to my sides "I do, you have been in my dreams for a whole month, I have been trying to capture your beauty in my sketches, but not been able to, as when I am awake with my eyes open I only have a faint ghost of your beauty in my mind. I have not been able to think about anything else though."

She looks to me and smiles as she puts her body through her paces with the sword dance "you an artist Tom?" she asks smiling.

"A bit, but usually I draw architecture, not people, but now I really want to draw you" I say honestly "well I would want to make love to you as well" I say also honestly, my cock jumps again.

"I would love for you to draw me, and yeah we can enjoy our bodies, but please go to the waterfall there" she points behind me with a blade "dip yourself in the pink water of the pool and clean yourself, I will join you shortly, just have to finish my dance."

I tear my eyes from her to see the pool, I actually have my feet at its shallow far edge, I see it has a pink sheen to it and I look back at her as I slowly back into the pool and once I am shoulder deep I dip my head too and while under the water I wash myself in the warm oily wonderfully scented water, making sure to clean myself everywhere, my skin gets wonderfully sensitive and the water stays clean around me. Not really strange as I take a morning bath every day.

I see her legs step into the water and she soon steps up right next to me in the water, I taste her sweat and our scents mingle in the water. The rain falls faster and lightning flashes illuminating her form clearly in the water and after she has cleaned herself she pushes me up against a wall my head surfacing, she smiles up from below the water surface and shifts down to kiss and lick my balls and, I grab the sides of the pool, but she grabs my hands and puts them on the sides of her head and I gently with trembling fingers touch her ears, caressing them, she has pointy ears, I already knew, but to feel them makes them more real, warm too. I moan as she nibbles and kisses and licks her way up my shaft, I just barely hold back from cumming, she is the first woman other than my mother who has touched me. The first woman who has touched me sexually, I am a rare exception that proves that just because you have money does not mean you can charm women, I am always awkward and say stupid things, why she wants to have sex with me I have no clue, but I am not going to stop her.

Her lips push my foreskin back and I nearly cum again as her lips slip down my cock head and then her hot tongue licks me and I feel my legs shaking and my cock jumps erupting in her and I cry out holding her head in my hands a bit forcefully as I feel my hips thrusting and I see cum erupt out of her nose under the water, yet she simply rests her hands on my thighs massaging them as I fuck her lips and mouth and tongue and throat, her pupils going agape and she moans into me. I finally finish cumming and relax my grip caressing her hair and ears, watching the white mist of my cum around her face fade away as my cock softens, but them her eyes glow and I feel a tingle and heat in my ball and cock and cry out as I go fully erect again. She sucks my cock head hard and pulls her mouth off me and my foreskin slides half way over my cock's head and she stands up and presses herself against me and kisses me and I taste myself on her, but I do my best to kiss back, my hands shift to her hips and butt and our tongues dance, I try to follow her lead and she smiles against our kiss and grabs my cock as she breaks my kiss, she looks amused.

"Am I the first woman for you? Are you um a virgin?" she asks her eyes sparkling as she gently caresses my cock.

"Y... yes... I um am, or was... is that okay?" I ask, as I know some women prefer men who have experience, or at least that is what the books say.

She laughs happily "well I don't mind, in fact I actually like that, I hope you will want to make love to me all night long, I think virgins tend to have more stamina, and you look fairly young, thirty at the most?"

I nod "twenty seven, a month ago" I say "also yes I want to make love with you as much as you will allow."

She laughs "careful what you ask for Tom, my sexual appetite is rather extreme, and your cock may need some healing to keep up, but I can do that" she then considers "I would like you to move me into the position you want me to be next and take me any way you like, I am curious what you might come up with."

I gaze into her gorgeous eyes "really?" and she smiles and nods "also do not be afraid to be a bit rough, I am not frail" she adds. I remember one of my sexual fantasies of her and I spin her around and grab her arms pulling them behind her back as I push her against the wall and then use my knees to spread her legs and then I try to shove my cock up into her and miss hitting her between the legs but not one of her holes and she moans wiggling her body a bit and I am sure pretend struggles, I try more slowly to poke into her and she moans and I am surprised and look down as I slide into her ass.

She blushes and playfully struggles but that only makes me get deeper into her and I shove her a bit harder against the wall and push into her until her pussy lips kiss my balls and then I start fucking her as hard as I can as her musical moans and cries and how incredibly she feels inside, lubricated with some kind of oil that feels amazing. I love how it feels for my balls to slap her wet pussy in the water and I last a lot longer this time, but that is not saying much and soon I collapse against her and erupt inside her ass and I let her arms go but shift up to her breasts grabbing them a bit clumsily and perhaps a bit to hard but they feel great in my hands and I moan. I fully empty myself in her and feel my tender cock going soft again and fall out of her ass.

Cara smiles and turns around to kiss me "mmm that was hot, what next?"

I breathe heavily and gaze into her eyes "do you have a bed? I would like to lay down and um..." I get scared that what I will ask will upset her.

Cara gazes into my eyes "you can ask me to do anything, but I may say no, but I still will want sex, though um... I am not into pain or violence so need not ask for those, but please what do you desire?"

I gaze into her gorgeous eyes and I feel like she really means that "I would love for you to use your mouth again, gently get me ready again and then..." I blush a little "I want you to ride me like you love me and must have my cock in you and want to get pregnant with my child."

Cara turns around in my embrace and gazes in my eyes "I... I can do that, but even if you cum in me and I want you to, we won't have children, I am not ready for that, and I won't have them with you, you can be my lover though, but you can not be my mate, so as long as you understand that going in and don't get sad or disappointed, then we can continue enjoying ourselves."

I actually do feel a bit sad, but it also makes sense, why would she want me to be her mate, she would want an elf like herself, at least that is how it usually is in stories, but also I like she is up front with me about what our relationship is. I nod "I am already ecstatic with what you have done already for me. I accept your limit there, but can you role play being more than just my lover?"

Cara laughs "mmm, I can try. I am actually in heat, at the most fertile point in my cycle, in full flowering, so if your seed is strong it will make me pregnant" if that was a lie it was extremely convincing and my cock slightly jumps at that, filling a little bit with blood, but I actually want her to start with me being soft, as I remember a story like that.

She takes my hand and leads me through the waterfall and I see a bed there lots of soft animal pelts covering the floor, and a huge pile of them, but also four beautifully carved pillars holding up a canopy with curtains that are sparkling beads and sea shells and some flowers, and a large mirror makes up the ceiling of the canopy, she leads me past the curtain into the bed, it is really soft yet also supportive, and not entirely flat, as I lay down I feel it has a curve to match the curve of my back and a curve for my neck and head where I can rest and see her clearly as she spreads my legs, her gaze is full of lust, need and love and she has a gorgeous blush.

She crawls up between my legs and inhales deeply of the scent of my cock and then gently lifts my balls with one hand and she then licks my anus, I get surprised by that and I feel a warm tingle up past my anus and then I feel lubricated in there, her tongue insistently pushes up against my anus and I moan and try to relax for her and then I feel her tongue slip into me, and something she does with her tongue makes me groan and my cock starts to weep precum she uses both hands to rub my still relaxed cock on her face as my precum weeps and coats her face, I reach my hands down to caress her ears and as I do she moans as her lips kiss around my anus, and my soft cock and balls and her face soon is coated in precum that mingles with the oil from the water and gives her a beautiful lustre. I can't understand why she would lick inside my ass, that can't be fun for her, but I also am surprised how good that feels for me, I don't see her as less from that though, like some men in stories, but she is lifted up above all the goddesses of my world to the highest one, a fertility, lust and sex goddess, I will worship her as long as I live.

She pulls her tongue slowly out and starts to kiss and suck on my balls moaning into them, I feel my cock throb as blood starts flowing in, but I try to control my breathing to not make it easy for her. She is enjoying herself, and the gaze she gives me, love, lust, hunger, so gorgeously hot. I watch her in the mirror as she shifts between my legs and moves her hands to masturbate, using just her lips and tongue to pleasure me she moans into my balls, and manages to make me grow a bit more and then shifts from making love to my balls to suck my soft cock into her mouth, she moans into me and I love how she applies some suction and her mouth is very wet and warm, her tongue massaging my slowly growing cock, I am still tender, but I love how her mouth feels despite that, and she is quickly making me go erect for her, she shifts with my erection but keeps pleasuring me even when I get fully hard, shifting up to involve her gorgeous wonderful breasts in pleasuring me, pressing them together with her hands and bending down to make her lips and tongue make love to my cock head each time I reach above her breasts, she makes me moan for her and gets me right up to the edge of cumming and then shifts one hand below my balls and applies pressure just as I cry out and my cock jumps but I don't cum as she massages the base of my cock and licks and sucks on my cock head making me whimper for her a bit, then she gently slows down until I come back to the right side of the edge.

She slides her body up over my cock and I feel her breasts, her belly, then her soft dense pubic hair and she kisses me before shifting down taking me in her pussy and she leans back taking my hands and making me grab her breasts and she hugs her legs to my sides and leans further back releasing my hands as she shifts her hands back to slide along my legs, I feel my cock push hard against her front wall as she leans back and I shift my gaze up to the mirror to watch her and her eyes meet mine "please mmm I need you to fill my womb with your strong seed" she moans she gyrates her hips against me, at first it is a bit painful, but I feel a warm tingle as her pussy massages me and see her eyes shimmer and as that happens my cock jumps and I see her belly distend a little and my cock feels no pain from the extreme angle anymore, her pussy is milking my cock like crazy, feeling so much better than her ass or mouth, it also feels so right like I am meant to be in there I have to let go of her breasts as she fully leans back between my legs and gyrates on my cock, her back arching making very slight thrusts deep inside her, she sings out her love for me in wordless moans and cries and her legs and body shake, as I caress her sides, belly, feeling my cock bulge and then I massage her thighs before I remember that women have a clitoris that makes them feel amazing, just like men do when their cocks are massaged, and I gently use both my thumbs to massage and feel where her clitoris is inside her starting from the bottom of her trimmed pubic mound and working around her sides and I see her clitoris hood and her clitoris peeking out and I decide to try massaging her clit as if it was a very tiny cock, using her clitoris hood as I use my foreskin when I masturbate.

She shakes and cries out loudly and massages her own breasts, pinching her nipples and suddenly she erupts with a lot of very slippery wetness around my cock and sprays all over me, it has her wonderful scent and I cry out as her pussy goes even more insane from that and I erupt in her, the most intense orgasm I have had in my life, and soon I feel my own cum spray out joining her wetness coating my balls and her ass and inner thighs, it forms a small pool and she keeps gyrating and her pussy keeps massaging me inside milking me and I cry out loudly "Cara aaah!" and she cries out "Tom mmm!" my heart melts, I love her, I want her to be mine and me hers forever. That is what my heart wants, but my mind knows that can't be.

As my cock stops erupting and throbbing she slows down her movement and stays still, but then she giggles and I feel myself be licked inside her pussy and her pussy keeps milking me and I groan as I am forced to stay hard and she moans and then I feel the tongue retract and she licks her lips with a cum soaked tongue and moans again "please mmm make love to ooh me, my legs are weak, but you are strong, I need more of your strong cum mmm" she moans and I see her open mouth as her tongue slides behind her lower teeth and then I feel her lick me again and her eyes glow faintly and my cock feels a tingling heat and my balls go hot and my cock jumps and I feel ready to go again, I grab her legs and push them with me as I lean over her and pick her up, her trembling legs pressing against my chest and she caresses my neck with her feet. I pick her up, laying her on one of the bumps to allow her back to arch and her pussy to be at a good angle to fuck, I lick and kiss the soles of her feet and start to pound into her holding her legs, she keeps massaging her own breasts and gazing up at me.

The sound of me pounding into her is loud wet slaps and my groans and moans and her moans and cries, I love how her tongue licks my cock when I go balls deep, but I hope I am not hurting her tongue with how hard I slam into her, we both get glazed with sweat as I fuck her and I want to kiss her so I lean down pushing her legs to her sides on the bed and her pussy and ass lifts to an even better angle where each thrust hits her front wall before bouncing deep and I capture her lips in a hungry passionate messy kiss tasting my own cum as I slip between her lips and she pulls her tongue away from my cock and to dance with my tongue, she lets her breasts go to press against me and wraps her arms around my back and grabs onto me hard as I fuck her and make her cry out an squirt for me again before I explode into her and collapse on top of her, shifting my arms to hold my weight up and not press her too hard into the bed. I break the kiss "stay put like this and hold your legs still when I pull out to let my cum stay in your pussy" I pull out as I am softening again.

Cara blushes "mmm yes my love" though she shifts her legs from where I release them to instead rest her head on her soles showing off how agile she is, she then shifts her hands to grab her butt cheeks and slip her ring and middle fingers into her pussy spreading herself wide for me "but I need more, fuck my ass and when you are ready to cum pull out and fill me until I overflow."

I look at what she is doing, and my cock throbs painfully, yet whatever she did to my cock quickly allows me to recover and I do as she asks, shoving my cock down her ass and watch inside her as my cock pushes the wall between pussy and ass each time I go in and my cum rises and falls with each thrust. She soon cries out and I watch her pussy convulse as she holds it open, it winks at me. I rest my right palm in her pubic mound and let the base of my thumb rest over her clitoris and wrap my thumb into her pussy and then grabbing her like that I start to shift my hand around fucking her with my thumb and she cries out barely able to stay in this position for me, I see surprise from her that I did this, I love that I could surprise her in a good way.

I make her orgasm several times before I have to pull out of her ass and slip my cock into her pussy held wide open and erupt in her, it does not feel as good as if I was fucking her pussy but I fill her to overflowing and I get a bit of a twisted idea and scoup up cum that spills out of her and in my right hand and move it up to her face and she opens her mouth for me, but I only drip a little in her mouth before I paint her face with my cum and she moans, I then put my hand in her mouth and she sucks on my hand, I feel her uvula and rub it a bit and feel her saliva flowing, she does not protest, and every impression I get is that she loves what I am doing.

I finally pull back and look at her gorgeous body before me "mmm I really want to sketch you like this." I say.

Cara giggles her eyes shimmer violet and next to her lands a book and pen, and I pick them up and with her staying put there I sketch and draw her and even colour and shade her in that position and the pen is magical allowing me to draw exactly the colour I want where I want, and I draw the other positions we made love in, and her doing her sword dance, I show her each drawing and she smiles happily then I start drawing positions I want to make love to her in and she blushes and giggles and comments on some of them, but she stays put in the position I asked her to stay in, wanting to humour my fantasy.

I then ask her "is it... is it alright if I draw you pregnant?"

Cara briefly looks a little bit sad but then nods "please do" and looks happy again, I make the drawing and she gets tears in her eyes "I love how you imagine me Tom" she says "but I will not become pregnant in this form, but only after I become what I am becoming, it scares me, as I don't really understand what I am becoming, but it is related to my irises, see the violet patterning that is consuming the green and blue?"

I nod and show her my eye study I did of her eyes "yes, your irises are gorgeously complex."

Cara blushes again and smiles "thank you, they were just green and blue before, but as I learn and do more powerful magic, and have sex with more men and women, the violet spreads and I feel other changes inside me, it hurts, but feels good, and also feels right" she pauses a bit thinking "in some of my dreams I see a violet eyed woman, with... with wings, can, can you draw what you think I would look like with wings, both normal and pregnant?" she asks.

I consider looking at her "feathered wings?" I ask.

Cara closes her eyes "the wings have feathers, but don't look like angel wings entirely, but like a succubus and dragon, and oh she has a tail with a heart shaped tip too. Scary gorgeously beautiful. Feathers of many colours, but still golden hair."

I nod "oh I can see her now" I say and draw what I imagine Cara would like after becoming, both normal and pregnant, from behind and in front and several different angles, after I finish I show her, I also made the wing feathers form a kind of starting violet and blue at the outer edges and then red next to her head, and for some reason I felt her eyes would be a little bigger than Cara's and complex violet patterning for her irises.

Cara's eyes stare at my drawings, and her eyes shake and glaze with tears and she nods "that is exactly who I saw in my dreams, Tom... thank you for drawing me and my future me."

I keep drawing and making love to her for a whole year, then she figures out how to get me back home, finding a wrap point as she calls it, deeper inside her cavern behind the waterfall, and she visits my home and stays for another year, making sure she is seen with me among women, and when she finally leaves several women show interest in me, it is not hard for me to be assertive with them, they are not Cara.

[Shocker]

Unique as always, and I wasn’t the slightest bit surprised you would go all the way with dancing in the rain.

I thoroughly enjoyed your story, but that is hardly a novel comment.

[Lucius]

@Vela Nanashi, you're very good at escapism with wondrous beauties, and your iridescent style is fantastic, even more so because it comes naturally to you. Thanks!

[VictimEyes]

@Vela Nanashi -

You pulled me into your world: - you've got me wishing that I was fan-dancing naked in the rain with broadswords for the viewing pleasure of my lover!!!!

[RapeU]

This is another wholesome gem of a unique world. There's no doubt in my mind you had this already in your head when you proposed the prompt "dancing in the rain." I'm glad that prompt was a winner

"I promise I mean you no harm, even if I look like some deranged flashing or peeping Tom, my name is Tom, but I don't mean to peep, or flash you, I... I don't even know how I got here."

[Claire]

An immediate suggestion: why not name this story "A Dream Come True" ot "A Wet Dream Come True"? I think that would perfectly fit with Tom seeing Cara in his dreams first.

I tear my eyes from her to see the pool, I actually have my feet at its shallow far edge, I see it has a pink sheen to it and I look back at her as I slowly back into the pool

That made me think of your story:

Brothers and Sister in arms, at the pink pool of love

I don't remember that story very well. It was one of 11 contest stories and I read them all in quick succession back then I think. But is that the same pool by any chance?

I really liked the aspect of Tom wanting to draw Cara and she clearly being flattered by that. i know you write as things come to you. But I think this is an example where a little bit of planning in advance could have enhanced the impact. If he had drawn her first before they had sex but the drawing felt a little off, and then again after they had sex and now he's able to capture her better because they got closer, then that would have given the story a nice little arc.

and your cock may need some healing to keep up

I should start a list of things women say to men in your stories I believe no man wants to hear in bed but that are just accepted as normal in your stories.


I really liked Tom as a character. I wouldn't mind seeing more of him in later stories. I think he spent two years in total with Cara? Might not be a lot of time for an elf like Cara. But I wonder how much Tom wished Cara would change her mind and choose him as her mate. For him, she's essentially his first relationshhip and they spent two years together. I really wonder whether he can just let go like that.